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Misery
By aXe FactoR
It hurts
Darn bad
Living hell
Playing dead
Tasty revenge
So pure and true
That I take…
Liberate myself
Through your pain
Stab wounds
Blood flows
Leak through
Stained red
I laughed insanely
Blooded blade
Watched life flows away
Trickles of blood
Your wide-eyed terror
I thrust again
Piercing screams
Ringing the air
Licks blood on blade
I end it all
Your life
Your fate
Sealing it
With my cold kiss of death
Misery.
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Copyright 2004 Psuedo_Me
Published on Wednesday, April 28, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Misery"
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A former member wrote:
Writtin very well. Very dark
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A former member wrote:
Deep, thats all i can say, Deep. Good write, I love it
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On Thursday, June 10, 2004, Blyss Rayne
(9)
wrote:
*shivers* chillingly wonderful. anger, darkness, and pain. my kind of poem. good job:) -taylor XD
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On Thursday, June 3, 2004, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Difinitive genuis, keep them coming...
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On Tuesday, June 1, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
should of caused the person more pain, to be considered misery, still well done
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On Monday, May 31, 2004, Emma Tenebrae
(13) wrote:
Love the fragmented style, full colors of anger, pain and revenge. Feels like psuedo-satisfaction was achieved.
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A former member wrote:
it is beautiful, strong, hollow and yet full,violent, but i still loved it . Opera Ghost
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
i love this piece! sounds like a desprate call to peace* great write!*669*
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A former member wrote:
wow, so angry but emotional! i love it!
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