Comments by All Members
- "This is lovely... placing devotion upon a raging river is risky. It's your choice to love what you like. Fragile is the canvas that's painted in the rain. It's a ten :)"
Posted by blue angel on "I Love You, Sweet Angel" by megaprime81
- " You never know if you're going to save or inspire one person, but if you do you've accomplished something great..I got to read this at the exact time I needed to, so thank you for writing it."
Posted by Ortolan on "Rise, Phoenix, Rise" by megaprime81
- "You don't deserve it. No one should feel like they deserve the cuts on their wrists. No one should feel like they deserve pain and sufferings.. Everyone deserves the best, its a shame not many of us get what we're worth"
Posted by Unknown on "I Deserve It" by megaprime81
- "I wanted to create a paradox that would level the whole universe. lol And i encourage you to try the palindrome; the first one is the hardest, but the second wasn't as hard."
Posted by megaprime81 on "Torment" by megaprime81
- "You're brilliant, blue angel. I love your works; and you inspire me to a greater challenge poetically. Much love."
Posted by megaprime81 on "Torment" by megaprime81
- "This is a really strong one. It works well. The raw pain is clear. I like it... you're quite inspired :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Torment" by megaprime81
- "cool write, can't forget about the sharks. They ensure that making it back to shore is just a fantasy ... 10 "
Posted by blue angel on "Sink or Swim" by megaprime81
- "I hear you megaprime, life sucks sometimes and its hard. your words speak to me, I hear you inside and its crying. you need a big hug is all, and then take what life gives you and make the best of it. I wish you the best, and I think the spirit you possess is going to get you far. keep smiling dude, its infectious. and im glad I inspired you."
Posted by haunted on "Sleepless Night (inspired by Haunted)" by megaprime81
- "Palindrome Poetry I take it? I have seen one or two examples of this... Must say, I rather fancy trying it out for myself now... Effectively accomplished~
[Saying you have no note--where notes are supposed to be placed--is a note, is it not? :P - Sorry couldn't help myself- Haha]"
Posted by Symbol on "Torment" by megaprime81
- "Great write. .. I wouldn't say Crazy. .. maybe temporarily displaced from society and its constraints/illusions of normalcy. But I digress... fantastic rhythm and a solid theme. One of your best IMO!"
Posted by BloodyMercy on "Losing My Mind" by megaprime81
- "How many times can I express to you?
You are my friend, I sacrificed you as you requested, over and again. The love for the daggering heart is consuming... I ask you to rest upon the stone of your desire. You are released at your own free will. You seek enslaving of the mind and heart. There is nothing more upon that hill of torture but pain. I lend my time. Peace I give you."
Posted by blue angel on "Beautiful Lady (Who am i to You?)" by megaprime81
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