Comments by All Members
- "beautifully painful...truth echoing through this. i love every bit of this, flowing with such sincerity and delicate memory...a very reflective and brilliant write."
Posted by AniDayz on "Can you see my hands?" by steuss
- "this poem is so unique, and i love it. the wording through-out the poem was so appropriate and sophistocated. nicely done. .....-samone"
Posted by Unknown on "The Blur of Reality" by steuss
- "i love the whole second stanza, this reminded me of Edgar Allen Poe's A dream within a dream....loved it! ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "The Blur of Reality" by steuss
- "i must agree with Jay Jii...and the pictures your words paint swirl before my eyes in such a glorious dream-like way ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "I followed into Daylight" by steuss
- "~And dreams are weak representations
Of the facts~ wow this had some truly wonderful lines...remarkable like everything of yours ive read ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Cycles..." by steuss
- "this was so sad in its elegance, im left shaken and reflecting, i especially loved the fourth stanza and the closing ended this perfectly ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "To Hopelessness" by steuss
- "captivated from the start it led me through a beautiful story with vibrant images and wrapped itself around my heart...this was truly wonderful ~kristy "
Posted by Sin on "The End" by steuss
- "wonderful, it flowed smoothly unlike most rhyme it didnt seem forced, again im amazed at your talent ~kristy "
Posted by Sin on "The Quiet of Solitude" by steuss
- "this was full of such vivid imagery it was more like a picture show than a poem, this was so beautiful i cant give it enough praise ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "The Ruby Unicorn" by steuss
- "~The tears of all have come down once again, And while they fell first from our eyes~ this is beauty captured in words..it left me with a soft aching and the last stanza just wrapped this up perfectly ~kristy
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Posted by Sin on "I know why..." by steuss
- "goodness gracious, your works leave me breathless and swimming in beautiful imagery, you are truly gifted and once again i cant believe this work of art hasnt been commented on more ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Apollo Gone" by steuss
- "my god, how can this not have more comments!?!? you are so very talented, im left in awe, and your words are expressed so beautifully,they flow like warm silk through the mind. i am just amazed ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Languish Lover" by steuss
- "i love your depth and choice of words, the whole second stanza was wonderful. i cant believe this doesnt have more comments, it is truly under appreciated ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Shadows Dancing" by steuss
- "this is so soft and sensual it makes my heart melt, the visual i got from this was sheer beauty,the whole first stanza was a work or art within itself, i wish i would of found this sooner ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Embrace" by steuss
- "this was lovely in its sadness...your words are flawless and they feed the mind beautiful images and wrench the heart at the same time ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Can you see my hands?" by steuss
- "I...I...I know EXACKLY how you feel..This poem reminds me alot of what I see when I wake up in the morning.. I have been in your shoes and this is a very good description of what it feels like."
Posted by Unknown on "I followed into Daylight" by steuss
- "melancholy, sweet in its memories, pointing out how beautiful the world really is and that there are enjoyable things... I like the simple nature-imagery. Nice."
Posted by Unknown on "Can you see my hands?" by steuss
- "if jrr tolkein were still alive, he might've stolen this and put it into one of his books. i love the line about the dryad drifting into his eyes. simply beautiful...*sigh*"
Posted by manunkind on "The End" by steuss
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