Comments by All Members
- "Jumping into the sea? to drown but panicking to come back up, but the water just took control and forced it back into it's endless belly, this was a great write ~nightly"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Hidden Penitentiary" by Heart of Stone
- "This just stole me, I started to read but I left shaking on the shore watching someone drown, the water engulfing and stealing his body. It sounded threatening and held an air to it that was just incredible"
Posted by Dissolving Poet on "Hidden Penitentiary" by Heart of Stone
- "let love not creep up like the night and steal us away...but instead let it illuminate and guide our way...very nice write ~kristy"
Posted by Sin on "Pleasing You" by Heart of Stone
- "I often wish I could go back in time to fix all mine, but all in all. I have no regrets, and would do it all again, especially if I learned from them."
Posted by Unknown on "Dead" by Heart of Stone
- "Awesome write, I have a poem called locked in a cage. It is filled with anger. lol"
Posted by Unknown on "Caged" by Heart of Stone
- "Nice job. I was thinking, at first, that this poem was about animal cruelty... great outcome. Well done. =-MO-="
Posted by Unknown on "How Sad..." by Heart of Stone
- "that was realy good.i like your style.keep it up.thanks for your comments on my work.sorry it took me awhile to reply i dont have a computer at home so i dont get to get on every day. "
Posted by Unknown on "Parents?Hardly" by Heart of Stone
- "the last two lines are...i don't even know what, but i can definitely relate to what you are feeling...guilt will eat at your insides...try to make peace with it...i'm trying to. "
Posted by girlafraid on "Parents?Hardly" by Heart of Stone
- "_um...i...*sighs* if you gave me a million years i might be able to convey the importance of this piece to me...maybe...and in a million years if i were to read this again it would sting as much as it does right now."
Posted by suicideseason on "Parents?Hardly" by Heart of Stone
- "_for me,there was such a beautifully portrayed sense of longing in this piece.so lovely...lost in the memories of better days...to the days of descent...and then there's the last line..."
Posted by suicideseason on "You Deserved Better" by Heart of Stone
- "_this is a bitter cup of tea...i gulped it down yet i savored it as i envisioned the antagonist in this piece getting their cup of tea.fucking awesome.i love it."
Posted by suicideseason on "Elementary Homicide" by Heart of Stone
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