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- "Rip it open, let it bleed, and take it all in. That is wise in many applications.
I like how you started with the physical heart and moved in to the symbolic one. But the rip it open I tell ya that line is something I'll think about."
Posted by RepulsiveAttraction on "Your Heart is Everywhere" by sea of sorrow
- "Loved it...so sad and heartwrenching. My own father left me, and my mother when I was a kid, and never came back. I no what it´s like 2 lose a dad. Sorry 2 hear dat he´s gone...a nice tribute."
Posted by Unknown on "farewell father,..." by sea of sorrow
- "Such a heart wrenching piece.. I took these words in a personal way because I've seen more than my share of deaths. My "father" included. I didn't look up to him but it's still a sorrow that festers inside watching a man's fatal down fall. I too wrote a poem for him. This is a great somewhat release from that pain, good write."
Posted by Unknown on "farewell father,..." by sea of sorrow
- "growing up is a bitch....physically and.mentally....we start out with dreams and intentions that are all to easy to let slip away... flow was lovely per usual :)"
Posted by Malice In Wonderland on "fading seed" by sea of sorrow
- "This is deep in meaning. I love the perception of the saplings struggle in it's life span. Nicely written :)~ Thanks for sharing*"
Posted by blue angel on "fading seed" by sea of sorrow
