farewell father,...
By sea of sorrow
have you ever watched someone, dying in pain
see them tighten up, and strain
the painful empty glaze, in there eyes
showing of there soon demise
clawing at the bed side,
till nails half break,
knowing exactly, what's at stake
tears hit the pillow and floor,
while shrieks of agony, fill the room
every heart's heavy with impending doom
their, lies your hero,
their lies, a piece of you
the strongest man, i've ever known
shriveled up, like a grape in august
inside, i couldn't cry,
i hugged him, gave him his final prayer to GOD,..
and said goodbye,...
the look in his eyes, when i was done
said , it's over, thoe, the battle was not won
that final glance, is stitched to my soul
reminding me one day, i'll pay my toll
until that day, i'll be here
holding on to that hero, i held dear
farewell father,...
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A former member wrote:
Loved it...so sad and heartwrenching. My own father left me, and my mother when I was a kid, and never came back. I no what it´s like 2 lose a dad. Sorry 2 hear dat he´s gone...a nice tribute.
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A former member wrote:
Such a heart wrenching piece.. I took these words in a personal way because I've seen more than my share of deaths. My "father" included. I didn't look up to him but it's still a sorrow that festers inside watching a man's fatal down fall. I too wrote a poem for him. This is a great somewhat release from that pain, good write.
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On Thursday, August 22, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
this has such a deep sadness to it... I still have my loved ones, this is something I dread.. great write.
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On Thursday, August 22, 2013, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
raw and graceful....it's never easy to watch someone we love slip away, and harder still be to be there when they go....beautiful write.