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- "Who can save us from us? I save myself from myself when I want saving, that is.. nice job on this, you can really feel the distress within it :)~"
Posted by blue angel on "Save me from Me" by darkheartmagic
- "I ask for acceptance as I take this last stand,
With a heart like a Child, Just a shell of a man.
Swallowed by shadows under the trees in the snow,
Swallowed by life, Frozen and Cold.
I could feel the words through me as i read ur write... i loved the flow thank u for sharing :)
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Posted by infinitebeing on "Save me from Me" by darkheartmagic
- "Smoothly stated in several ways, with an over-arching future fear of something lingering just beyond perception perhaps. We all have those demons, cheers DHM!"
Posted by dwells on "Soundless Thunder" by darkheartmagic
- ""The truth we've known becomes a lie, for what is real can we decide? Lost within this dream-like state, of love and lust consumed by hate." Feeling that the most. Very well written & much enjoyed :)"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Soundless Thunder" by darkheartmagic
- "Do I even need to say I loved it? Because I'm pretty sure I've said that to all your pieces and if I haven't I've probably thought it. Another great work by you. Absolutely stunning. "
Posted by andhaka on "Soundless Thunder" by darkheartmagic
- "8th stanza, third line, seventh word; I believe you meant "will". That being said, I enjoyed the rhythem of this piece. Effervescent states are enjoyable at times; Kudos."
Posted by Unknown on "Soundless Thunder" by darkheartmagic
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