Comments by All Members
- "i get this way. satisfied is not in my vocabulary. alliterately lovely, as always. "
Posted by dramamine on "Talon." by the Id
- "voracious and insatiable , great depiction of this archetype ... I like the title"
Posted by kinkifrog on "Talon." by the Id
- "Amen, my friend. was hard to write for that same reason"
Posted by the Id on "Taming." by the Id
- "and rain drops is a metaphor for....? lol yeah. you get it. "
Posted by the Id on "Torrent. " by the Id
- "this reminds me of when I was driving to work the other day. it was night and raining, and everytime I passed under a street lamp it seemed to intensify. I think it felt that way because I could see them coming for a split second. anyways this made me think of that."
Posted by Patches on "Torrent. " by the Id
- "Great detail and imagery in this piece... The rain makes its own song and I love listening to it in the silence. "
Posted by Magdalena on "Torrent. " by the Id
- "an afterthought. an epiphany. too little, too late? i hope not. sometimes it takes the circumstance, or in this case song, to realize. i definitely know the feeling. thank you for posting."
Posted by dramamine on "Torrent. " by the Id
- "Your form and placement made this fun to read. It was almost playful and that combined with the real message of the work created such an interesting piece. It's ambitious and it succeeds. I'm glad that I've found you."
Posted by Salty Ships on "Taming." by the Id
- "The hurt in this piece was palpable. Your ability to convey such heavy emotion in a few words with an almost whimsical foundation is gut wrenching."
Posted by Salty Ships on "Tantric." by the Id
- "the lilt and tilt of form definitely contributed to the power of this piece. "cloud dense claustrophobia" particularly stunned me because i've tried to capture that feeling so many times and could never sum it up in just three words. where i fumble over my tongue and scramble for the proper words to convey my feelings, always so long-winded and desperate to get my point across, you know just where to stick the needles and pins. A teacher once told me that poetry is saying everything in as few words as possible. i agree with that to an extent. there is no doubt of your poetic prowess. there is a cyclical nature to this piece. it evolves as it revolves, and as always, i am much impressed. you have such a unique style and voice, yet familiar like songs that resonated deeply within me once but i cannot place, and your titles always add that little something extra that makes your works feel so complete."
Posted by Unknown on "Taming." by the Id
- "this overall is a really cool poem but its hard to read because my imagination is vivid enough to recall the taste of acetone. "
Posted by King_Crazy_Dave on "Taming." by the Id
- "an empyreal sky, but what if there is no such thing? What an immaculate soul."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Taming." by the Id
- "seems as though unconscious writing is the most truthful.. whether you mean it or not. this kind of hit personally for me. wanting someone and never obtaining the grasp you thought was possible. maybe i'm reading too far into it. it's well written, though. the flow is impeccable. the let down is cruel."
Posted by dramamine on "Taming." by the Id
- "colors and scents, the essence of love. and the self breaking of hearts. it's easy to feel this pain. it's not, to live it."
Posted by Unknown on "Tarassis." by the Id
- "you describe this women well I have a picture in my head of what she looks like and is like I really like these lines a lot
She was severely citrus scented so I resented the smell of orange peels
and felt scurvy pained.
"
Posted by Unknown on "Tarassis." by the Id
- "i love the duality here and internal conflict here. that scurvy line was pretty genius. potent and impressive stuff, mister."
Posted by Unknown on "Tarassis." by the Id
- "gorgeous... you write like i've never read. you really captured something exquisite here"
Posted by Unknown on "Teknonymy." by the Id
- "I've just finished reading all that you have posted here...you're a great writer. You have a new fan."
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "Tantric." by the Id
- "I've never heard of two people so perfect for one another. it's too bad that one should live without the other. She sounds beautiful and fragile. "
Posted by dramamine on "Teknonymy." by the Id
- "I didn't look at who wrote this- it was such a different read I thought you were brand new and this was a debut. A hell of a debut- but you had my attention before and now, I will really be tracking.."
Posted by Maladroit on "Teknonymy." by the Id
- "I think it was you who once so eloquently stated "weak people have it so easy". I couldn't agree more. Show them your strength, & it's "you should stop trying to show everyone how tough you are, I ain't buyin' it"...show them your moments of weakness & it's "chin up & quit bein' such a pussy!" The truly strong cannot win. I think honesty is a "weakness" for many people, on both sides of the coin. Thanks for the piece, Idster. "
Posted by Unknown on "Torn. " by the Id
- "WOW! The delicate selection of dense words just draws me more and more into it. I love this "
Posted by Gothchic on "Tantrums." by the Id
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