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- "I'm just wandering what you might of enjoyed for dinner today ! And I'm very certain God has heard them, question is, have they heard God ? .. Great and powerful write here!
Our pleasure to meet you Gabriel......13......."
Posted by 13sonsofgod on ""i pass a thousand faces a day"" by Gabriel
- "It's interesting because I think I would fall into both groups here; both observer who is wondering and the person who is pondering. I agree with harlequinn, you packed a lot of possibility into just four lines like some kind of poem grenade that, if it would explode, would send us all into existential crisis. Very cool :)"
Posted by Dilated View on ""i pass a thousand faces a day"" by Gabriel
- "I loved the simplicity of the poem. Just four lines of literature cause you to question even the existence of god. This is a truly powerful poem packed into four lines; simplicity at its finest."
Posted by harlequinn on ""i pass a thousand faces a day"" by Gabriel
- "I wonder if you still exist......if you do this was awesome dude. artsy fartsy. well done minimalism. "
Posted by Unknown on ""it seems"" by Gabriel
- "it made me a little sleepy... you may want to darken it up a bit with some cool vocab. or someone threatening a bigger suicide"
Posted by mywristshurt on "let us suppose" by Gabriel
- ""murder/hands stained with the silver/blood of slain dreams" AH! This was expertly written...wonderful write! I would definately have to plead guilty (to all charges). *Evangel*"
Posted by Unknown on "how does our young plaintiff plea?" by Gabriel
- "hahaha...i am glad this got the comments above...it really was childish...it really was madness...it really was pointless...the cycle of relationships with people that i go through seem to be all of those things too though, and that is what i was attempti"
Posted by Gabriel on "{ iNFatuAtion!}," by Gabriel
- "something of a quick descent into madness.......i admire the writer for having the know-how to pick up a pen and commentate in play by play moments to the very trainwreck his mind is on...fascinating."
Posted by elisa on "{ iNFatuAtion!}," by Gabriel
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