Comments by All Members
- "the message you display i agree with, but understand that they are human, and humanity is a mastake, there for they bath in there mastakes and call them succses.~~~Grave"
Posted by WinterGrave on "c*nts without a clue" by theBAC
- "i agree, but there's not much any one person can do about it, and as long as every one is pre occupied with their day to day lives, not much is going to change"
Posted by Johny_D_Lewis on "c*nts without a clue" by theBAC
- "your poem reassured me that i'm not seeing things and another beings eyes give the same messages to its brain about this sort of bullshit. good write. -Dirt."
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "c*nts without a clue" by theBAC
- "You just described my roommate. I don't think he ever paved a road of self discovery. You don't want to be that person, it's fucking irritating to witness. Someone with no soul, sense of theirself, style of their own. "
Posted by Unknown on "living in the shadow of another" by theBAC
- "ah the bliss ogf ignorance is good for you. but what about the awareness of others? ignorance hurts people in its process of unknown. but i wish i could just have it for one day myself."
Posted by Twilight on "living in the shadow of another" by theBAC
- "awwww too cute. A lovely flow, though I'm torn with "i long to taste your chocolate eyes"... a beautiful description, but I can't help thinking 'ewwww, licking eyes!'. If you've ever done this by accident, you'll know what I mean. :) Fox
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Posted by flying_fox on "rainbow socks with the individual toes" by theBAC
- "Is there some girl that you desperatley want but can't have? I have noticed a certain tone in your poetry as of late. Great read."
Posted by Unknown on "rorshach man" by theBAC
- "O. I like this one better than the last one i read of yours. This one starts out with a ballsy visual and holds up its promise to the reader. the length is perfect.Good Write. -Dirt"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "dio? who dis? dis ain't dr. dre?" by theBAC
- "i like the way you wrote this, it's not disjointed but its not your average poetic format either. The concept of the poem is good as well, i like it. -Dirt"
Posted by AshtrayDirt on "rorshach man" by theBAC
- "I enjoyed this one quite a bit. Seems like I can go weeks where I feel like I don't need a single soul in the world. Then in a matter of seconds I find myself wrong. ~Loomer"
Posted by Loomer on "rorshach man" by theBAC
- "And this is why your awesome Brett. I hate stages of self reflection, seemingly the past month or so has been nothing but that. I just like the simple way it's shown in this poem. ~Loomer"
Posted by Loomer on "ferlinghetti's seed" by theBAC
- "very saddening piece brett. the acceptance of the position of underdog...or underachiever. but in the end the most unlikely becomes likely. if that makes any sense."
Posted by Twilight on "ferlinghetti's seed" by theBAC
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