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rorshach man
By theBAC
i am the everchanging
with the rearranging limbs
i change my way one day
and put it back again
i mold to fit my surroundings
i adapt to what’s around
i talk in the regional dialect
that is accepting
adhere to the culture and sounds
i will rebuild myself
‘til you love me
tear apart and rip all down
i will be what you want me to be
if you’ll be my friend
i have no one else in this town
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Tuesday, March 16, 2004.
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"Poetry"
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, -Oz-
(131)
wrote:
"i will rebuild myself ‘til you love me" very powerful.....very thought provoking write ~>OZ
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A former member wrote:
Is there some girl that you desperatley want but can't have? I have noticed a certain tone in your poetry as of late. Great read.
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
kinda wishfull...
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, AshtrayDirt
(31) wrote:
i like the way you wrote this, it's not disjointed but its not your average poetic format either. The concept of the poem is good as well, i like it. -Dirt
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Loomer
(11) wrote:
I enjoyed this one quite a bit. Seems like I can go weeks where I feel like I don't need a single soul in the world. Then in a matter of seconds I find myself wrong. ~Loomer
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