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rainbow socks with the individual toes
By theBAC
(or the enthralling beauty i know)
i long to taste your chocolate eyes
and smell your coconut skin
toss cares into the wind
catch them
and put them back in our minds
find a dandelion and blow it
through the air
watch them catch the breeze
and mix with the uncaught cares
let me kiss your dew-drop lips
moist from the cold morning
moist from looking at me
grab my hand and squeeze it
inhale the pollen
exhale the joy
you are my lovely girl
and i’m your lovestruck boy
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Copyright 2004 Brett Alan Coker
Published on Tuesday, March 16, 2004.
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"Poetry"
Comments on "rainbow socks with the individual toes"
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes
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wrote:
Such a beautiful collection of metaphors. A really tender, sweet piece. Loved it. ~L
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
awwww too cute. A lovely flow, though I'm torn with "i long to taste your chocolate eyes"... a beautiful description, but I can't help thinking 'ewwww, licking eyes!'. If you've ever done this by accident, you'll know what I mean. :) Fox
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On Thursday, March 18, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
BTW, I have those socks too - we should all form a club!
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A former member wrote:
Very nice poem. I liked the symbolism. Great read.
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On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, yslehc
(334) wrote:
aw lol cute poem , i love it... ps.i have those socks YAY for me!
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On Tuesday, March 16, 2004, nell
(270) wrote:
i love the title weeeeeeeee! those are the happiest socks ever! just as happy as this poem!
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