Comments by All Members
- "sweet ... pulled right through this by the form of it ... like a fall ..... tapping the emotions beautifully .... very cool ... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Captured" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Jaded, that was awesome. You linked that together like a song that anyone could listen to over and over again. Yur Freakin Awesome!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Fear" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Jaded, it's been awhile since i've been able to be on here, but your work just screams out how much you have mastered the art...though a dark poem, i feel back at home...marvelous...-Methos"
Posted by Methos on "I still scream" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "why is it that we lie to ourselves? ... another thought.. anyway, this was buetiful, wow, i can hear so much of your strained cries.. yet buety is found through all of it... ~blue"
Posted by Bluegoddess on "Captured" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "damn society. and damn him, your too good for him anyway, hes not worth it, your so talented, im so sorry to see you hurt like this, i can hear your screams, and feel your tears, im so sorry ~blue"
Posted by Bluegoddess on "I still scream" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- ""Will you ever drown in my hair again
as we cry the winds to sleep" was a particularly powerful stanza...the flow of this poem showed so much sincerity and emotion...an outporing of honesty...nicely done...-l-
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Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "I still scream" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "the format at the end brought an extra shot of disturbing power to this piece, already shot through with frustration, pain and doubt... very emotive and well written...extremely effective. purr"
Posted by purr_verse on "Captured" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Some how I sense pain in your words... Perhaps you're pained... love the write, awesome... inspiring... beautiful. ~*~tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "Captured" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "This does bring a smirk to my face, my gramps always has faith in me when NO ONE ELSE does. Wow, I am going to see hm tommorow..Thanks.+T.P.U+"
Posted by Unknown on "Life On The Edge" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- ".*smiles wistfully*.this makes me think of my mom's dad.he always thought i was special.i think i've proven him wrong.nevermind that...the point?i don't think i have one.so i'll just say that i feel you and then get the fuck out of dodge...awesome.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Life On The Edge" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "I see a lot of anger here but I also see some hope or longing peeking through too. I've been there, its tough. Great display of your feelings---jer"
Posted by braindeadpoet on "So Cruel" by Jaded Jezzabelle
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