Comments by All Members
- "simply brilliant. your flow is flawless; the rhyming is timely and beautiful... this is... the third of yours i've read, and i'm fast becoming a fan of yours"
Posted by Unknown on "Crusade" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "oh my god that was amazing.. this being a recent post, i'm still quite surprised there aren't any comments at all on this. i was completely under your roof of pain, drank your bitter wine, etc. with this"
Posted by Unknown on "Pretend Not To Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Holy shit you are great! your words are so meaningful and though i love rhyme you put a different type of rhythm into this peice! Fantabulous!! ~jade~"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "fucking awesome! "Iam what Iam a contradiction
confined by my addiction
I'll never be who you want me to be" is proof that no matter how hard we try,we can't be what others would like us to be.very strong ending,too.rock on!~season
"
Posted by suicideseason on "My Own Conviction" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Good job, I think many of us can relate. The last time I did it I cleaned the entire house, cut the grass, waxed my car and the on the third day decided to paint the house. hmmmm, I was much more productive back then. Anyway, this was great!!!---jer"
Posted by braindeadpoet on "Need For Speed...a drug story" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "i love the intensity radiating from this one."Then let me make it clear
That I will not ever be dependent
On your judgement of my accomplishments" is simply incredible.very powerful and provoking.~season"
Posted by suicideseason on "Crusade" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Love's choices are often hard to make. Making any choice out of emotions is hard. I would walk away. Great write Jaded. I love your work. -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "Do You Know" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- ""But, still you'll trust me from the,
start, I can, manipulate you, infatuate you with a smile"...So very true, at least, it is for me, then again i'm always getting manipulated by women....lol seriously, nice write. -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "Not The Average Kind" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Hmm...I really really like this one. I guess it has something to do with that women power thing...but mostly the honesty in it and all of the contradictions of a person. "
Posted by Unknown on "Not The Average Kind" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Excellent write, though i'll have to agree with Recycled on the chances of actually meeting that one man, but if you do, cherish it and hold on to it, for as long as it lasts. -Methos"
Posted by Methos on "This Is Who I am...Myself" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "you have had on me... " I love it. It captures and intrigues so well, it is an amazing line. From an objective point of view, there is a clear beginning middle and end, and it all comes together in a great composition. Wonderful."
Posted by crazyflax on "Something Real" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "a huge sense of loyalty and love for the best friend, and it would be hard to not somehow be able to relate to this. "the other day you said to me, that you've been more than a
connect to me...true...but in reality, you'll never know
the effect that y"
Posted by crazyflax on "Something Real" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "From a creative point of view, I honestly can not understand how you came up with this, it's really amazing. I love the way that you've changed the rhyming schemes, it's like those times in life where you don't mean to but somehow it happens. It portrays "
Posted by crazyflax on "Something Real" by Jaded Jezzabelle
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