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- "Loved every little word, every capitalised X. Somehow I felt at home, like someone knew me. "They sold our innocence
creating in its place
a surealistic void
that we've come to eXcept
as
life" loved this stanza. one more to add to my fav's {dia}"
Posted by diavolessa on "XXXGENERATIONXXX old DP" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "This remindes me of something the father in "SLC Punk" said, "son, we didn't sell out...we bought in". Sure you did!!! Anyway, great piece. Using all the X's was great, it lent to the poems power---jer"
Posted by braindeadpoet on "XXXGENERATIONXXX old DP" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Wow!!! I can relate all too much. To the point I became more angery as I read your feelings. A long time ago I promised myself I wouldn't try to understand...but I can't help but care---jer"
Posted by braindeadpoet on "I Don't Understand" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "the emotion in this knocked me on my ass...and hard...i wish i had answers.damn...all i know is the world sucks...and you seemed to have figured that much out without me.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "I Don't Understand" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "Magnificent!! This poem has so much emotion and not only that but it's well crafted! I love the subject matter and the beautiful manner in which you illistrated your opinion...Nicely done! ~Faerie~"
Posted by Naked_Faerie on "I Don't Understand" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "every time i read a celebration of the night piece , i go back to " blue , red , and grey" a relatively unknown Who song from who by numbers - " kinda hits the nail on the head , like this one does - great - funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Electrick purple sky" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- ""This animosity that creeps between us
one day will defeat us "...wow.the wording is excellent.and the flow...oh my god.this is just so heavy.awesome as always.:)tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "Lucidity" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "This reminds me a lot of the close friendships that I have, and it feels so good to be able to have that, "I've come to the realization
that I recognize my reflection
in your eyes" Beautiful.. ~Dawn"
Posted by IceDragoness on "True" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- ""I just want us to be how we used to be
when you were never in such a hurry to get up and leave..." ...yeah..... i feel ya on that one. excellent write. your emotions shine through well
"
Posted by Sky Singer on " Hesitation" by Jaded Jezzabelle
- "I dont get how this is adult content...but whatever....thats strange how you have no idea where that came from...that happens to me all the time...i like the way you used the caps...."
Posted by Exodus on "Surrender (adult content)" by Jaded Jezzabelle
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