Comments by All Members
- "great, just fucking great! lol. Nothing better than going to the bar to drown away your sorrows. "Came here to heal her pain... its a coincidence that that's... the same reason I came" That owns. tata darling. ~*~tart~*~"
Posted by Kinkypoptart on "At The Bar" by TornPaperDoll
- ""She can’t remember why she’s crying
And maybe it’s better that way" i've been there. thank you for finding the words. awesome write. i love all of your pieces. "
Posted by physicalgraffiti on "At The Bar" by TornPaperDoll
- "_i really feel this one "And the more liquid that leaves her body
The more that she puts in" is a great line that i am all too familiar.nothing like drowning the pain at the bar.awesome.-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "At The Bar" by TornPaperDoll
- "you have a wonderfull knack for flow, but more important you've found a voice and it is wonderful."
Posted by Unknown on "I Wish..." by TornPaperDoll
- "god damn...fucking intense...we scream for help and get nothing...and people wonder why others commit suicide...sometimes it seems like the only choice.nice!-tim"
Posted by suicideseason on "My Cry" by TornPaperDoll
- "aww thats so sad.. this is exactly how i felt a couple years ago for awhile about my mom.... nice write"
Posted by yslehc on "My Cry" by TornPaperDoll
- "wowwww i love it!!! "Even darkness has its stars".. i wish i'd thought of that line lol... ahh i want to know someone like that.... love the last two lines too... GREAT job"
Posted by yslehc on "Show Me" by TornPaperDoll
- "*loved it* Too many people hide away their true self.. And you described it perfectly. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "Show Me" by TornPaperDoll
- "beautiful!!!!! completely BEAUTIFUL!!!! i loved the line even darkness has its stars....
omg i loved it great job keep up the great work it had a wonderful meaning to it!!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Show Me" by TornPaperDoll
- "I like this a lot, especially the title. It seems to be about parents or a parent to me, who's looking more for self-gratification than parenthood."
Posted by Unknown on "Superhero You" by TornPaperDoll
- "I've been keeping up with your work and I have to say you have a wonderful talent for putting you emotions into words that paint a visual for the reader...that is what its all about...hats off to you"
Posted by Jaded Jezzabelle on "Superhero You" by TornPaperDoll
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