Comments by All Members
- "you can write about a subject, about anything that happens. I know this poem isn't entirely about that fight, but .. yuo've got this amazing way of writing portraying such deep feelings. Which is a"
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "yes, we all are outsiders, and no matter how hard we fight, we will always be "new". thats the beauty here .. we all fit in here better than anywhere else. our dearest website. i just realized how well "
Posted by unusual_blood on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "Love how you wrapped this one up. You took the words right out of my mouth, right out of my soul, right out of my heart. So ironic how in the end, in "exchange for the pain" we end up "decorating xmas trees" ..."
Posted by unusual_blood on "in exchange" by manunkind
- "Ali this poem is FUCKING AWSEOME! I really like the repition, and .. it's just .. it's really really good. I really do believe that you are a TRUE poet. really great stuff here, and just when I thought"
Posted by unusual_blood on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "you have true talent. This poem is amazing. I love it. The words you choose are compatible and it brings the poem rythm. But not only is the rythm and writing good, but the message you convey. another great poem. *applause*"
Posted by Unknown on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "Wow, this is lovely. "stars before us bleeding silver cream". . . "we now bleed in black and not in red". . . Beautiful lines. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "the conquerers" by manunkind
- "Lol, a lovely poem. I also like the flow of it, the way it's like a conversation. . . Delightful! ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "dont touch me" by manunkind
- "'i see weakness in the mirror' I love the broken staind-glass refracted-reflective red mirror feel of the style to this peice, like shattered thoughts; shards shimmering w/ poetry jewels. "
Posted by Unknown on "break the mirror" by manunkind
- "i dont know. i just have very low self image and all that. its hard to have a good one when i move so often. anyway, thanks for the comments. "
Posted by manunkind on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "Oooh I love this. It's just... released... it's lovely. So wonderful. And I enjoy your works, I just don't comment often. Just so you know."
Posted by Unknown on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "awww ali babe don't worry. we still got our years to come. and eachother to critique and shit ;) shit man, look at all these comments, IT'S RAINING COMMENTS! "
Posted by unusual_blood on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "I agree whole-heartedly with past comments; this was quite well done.... oh, and I eat dogs; tastes like chicken ;)"
Posted by Unknown on "in exchange" by manunkind
- "its hard not to. i guess its this whole complex built up from moving. im always the "new" person. "fit in" her than in a school. heh.
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Posted by manunkind on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "hey. thanks everybody. i wrote that in a moment of fury. yeah. then, after i write these things, i tend to be find. but as i said: still intimidated. thanks for the replies :)"
Posted by manunkind on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "I really like this though. And I enjoy all of your other works. Don't give in to the intimidation. It's just the little voice inside your head that wants you to fail so it can be right. "
Posted by Unknown on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "Psst...just so you know. I'm still intimidated. I actually wrote a poem about it also...just not so blunt because...as you said...it's embarrassing. But just so you know, you're not alone :)"
Posted by Unknown on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "So what if others are better? With writers like Velvet or Cre around i cant hope to be the best poet. I damn well know i'm not the best person around. I'm just... me."
Posted by Drifter on "i reek of inferiority" by manunkind
- "i like this, although i've been the antaganist of a few arguments here. Good work, and stop considering yourself as an outsider. We all are."
Posted by Drifter on "we, the artists" by manunkind
- "oh my god can i relate lol. When i first started posting here i checked comments every few seconds and almost stopped when nobody posted. Well now i get read a little more and still like comments, but eventually i realized i write for myself, good or ba"
Posted by Drifter on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "You have no reason to feel intimidated. I'm reading your stuff, and it's awesome. Thank you for letting us read your stuff and your self."
Posted by crazyflax on "red letters say: WHORE" by manunkind
- "You paint such vivid portraits for me. The lines turn into the colors, the tone changes with each new word. Amazing, I loved it, and the monotony of it all, I found, worked great."
Posted by crazyflax on "pink nail polish" by manunkind
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