Comments by All Members
- "right now... i identify with both sides of this bad situation... very well executed...very tortured too..."
Posted by BetaWolfinVA on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "Awee.. know the feeling darling. licks. hey you should mail SilentStalker he is the King at hooking up profiles. just look at his and Amaryllis profiles. you would not believe the possibilities and colors and schemes available. much licks ."
Posted by Devilish on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "Is this what poetry is ? damn it no wonder they all hate me. lol. very nice though pryzm. a masuline sensual poet. how hot is that. i need a towel."
Posted by Devilish on "The Point of Poetry..." by Pryzm
- "Beautiful. so how much experience do you have pryzm? out of curiousity ofcourse.. great job with couplets."
Posted by Devilish on "Birth" by Pryzm
- "Aweee i love this. i wanna be looked at through windows. i'll be sure to be half dressed .. lol. i love this. very soft and sensual and tingly. hello there you .we should get naked again sometime. lol"
Posted by Devilish on "Cathedral Windows" by Pryzm
- "i liked the battle between dark and light, hope and loss...very vivid imagery....quite pleasing to the eyes. thanks for sharing. and welcome back."
Posted by natalie on "Cathedral Windows" by Pryzm
- "the openness of this is quite nice... it goes from light to dark then the last two lines a reassurance that hope isnt gone. thank you for sharing."
Posted by Unknown on "Cathedral Windows" by Pryzm
- "You have a strong hold on using words to describe how you feel. I love that about you. It's so comfortable. I am humbled that my work had that effect, but I am thankful as well. You're voice resonates in my soul - I can't wait to read more of your passion.
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Posted by Pryzm on "Cathedral Windows" by Pryzm
- "I can see the watery reflection of the rainbow in the marble. The colors are vivid and true. Each read, I had to squint when reading the bit about the sun as if it was truly blinding me. Slip into the night where dreams live washed over me like cold water being poured on my head and the sunrise warmed me once again. Way to make me feel. I'm giddy enough to hug myself."
Posted by Carmen Jade on "Cathedral Windows" by Pryzm
- "Thank you Lilith - I'm glad you liked it..."
Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "The soft heart on our sleeves - given wholly and freely - leads us down this road every time...
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Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "This is gorgeous Pryzm. It gives the reader an insight into another time and place. "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Birth" by Pryzm
- "This brought to mind all the late nights I've wasted crying and crying...and crying over unrequited love and my own reluctance to let it be."
Posted by Carmen Jade on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "God do I know these feelings.... this hits close to home for me thank you for sharing this with us..."
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "Tired" by Pryzm
- ""Painfully beautifully written" whoa...I don't know what to say to that! Thank you Devilish....I hope I continue to peak your interest."
Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "You can write this....have faith. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you."
Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "Thank you karen, I hope there are more to come that you like as well. I'm glad you're here.
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Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "Oh I will...in fact your name makes me want to post a description of Pryzm. Thank you....stay tuned."
Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "The musings of a walking doormat (Pisces). I'm glad you liked it."
Posted by Pryzm on "Tired" by Pryzm
- "Thank you Poetess. I'm glad that I got it across. Sometimes I wonder if my work gets my true feelings across - but I 'spose that's the inherent art of us poets. (I used "across" twice - that pisses me off...but I'll leave it, I'm too tired to think of a different word. ;-)"
Posted by Pryzm on "The Point of Poetry..." by Pryzm
- "Thanks Chaos - it is delicate, I'll agree....however there will be some work that may not be so delicate. I'm eager to share...and to learn. Right hooks and jabs at my work are welcome - just keep 'em above the belt. ;-)"
Posted by Pryzm on "The Point of Poetry..." by Pryzm
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