Comments by All Members
- "
I scream but nothing comes
forth from my throat, but a
bloody gurgle as I am strangled
by the shadows of my depression
Good lines!"
Posted by Edgewalker on "Follow Blindly" by M4V3rIcK
- "There will be more to this eventually depending on how things go in my life
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Posted by M4V3rIcK on "Of Self" by M4V3rIcK
- "I like the imagery you've used to convey your point... instead of just saying 'hurt', you've wonderfully expanded it into 'healed by flame/brushed by death/torn by reality'... very nicely written, but I'm left hungering for more... _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Of Self" by M4V3rIcK
- "I like this for the touch upon an imortal beauty, feared and revered...Ashes"
Posted by Unknown on "Awakening" by M4V3rIcK
- "i really like this. it creeps me out but in a kinda nice way that is hard to explain. maybe i'm sick but i think it is sort of sweet... *ahem* yeah anyways good write."
Posted by xX pretty vacant Xx on "Mine Forever" by M4V3rIcK
