Comments by All Members
- "this is very beautiful. I just wish lesbians would let men in the bedroom with them because I don't think women realize how sexy and sensual love can be between two women. you captured this moment very well. and it is very romantic. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "The sounds she makes" by Deathkitten
- "oh god, I love cemeteries. they can be very tranquile and relaxing. I love this poem sounds like your waiting to die in the graveyard. how cool. give me directions...I'll meet ya there. lol...awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "The Field Full of Stone" by Deathkitten
- "I'm not sure if I should have a warm fuzzy feeling inside for a furry friend or a hot sweaty feeling for a sexy seductress stretching out on my bed, lol, I guess both are good to come home to at night. One will just put you to sleep faster, maybe?"
Posted by Alchemist on "The sounds she makes" by Deathkitten
- "Very feline indeed, but never roll your head as any chiropracter will tell you. This visual image was a memorable one and softly sensual, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "The sounds she makes" by Deathkitten
- "i sense lots of metaphores and i cant quiet put my finger on it just yet. but its got me thinking and i love reading between the lines. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Kissed at the seal" by Deathkitten
- "awe jess this is a really heartbreaking poem. but its spectacular all the same. your words although somber really explode all over this peice. it left me with the heavy emotions in your pen and the paper just comes to life when you guide it. awesome kitten!"
Posted by haunted on "I thought you should know" by Deathkitten
- "This is a desprate kind of hurt. I feel you. "Sometimes I wish I could walk through a picture mirror, let the sharp shards slice me into pieces, so I could finally look how I felt." Prozac nation. I'm only a message away if you need to vent."
Posted by Unknown on "I thought you should know" by Deathkitten
- "No need to worry over words. I wish I could be published, however, I feel i'm not worthy of such (just yet). Thank you for the compliment!"
Posted by Deathkitten on "Kissed at the seal" by Deathkitten
- "Going fishing myself this morning. Saw the electric eels on River Monsters last week, but this sounds to me like maybe electro-shock therapy slang? Catching just a hint of meaning from each line as the momentum picked me up and carried me along, what a rush! Thanks DK, one of your best!"
Posted by dwells on "Kissed at the seal" by Deathkitten
- "I love to fish! though, in all sincerity I would have a heart attack if I caught an eel! lol
Awesome write! Sometimes when I read your work I am at loss for an appropriate adjective, so please forgive me if my comments seem trite and over used. :) I do truly believe you are too good not to be published!"
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Kissed at the seal" by Deathkitten
- "From the beginning I thought it was going to turn into a freaks come out at night story and be an allegory for men on the prowl for hot women after a long full moon night of drinking. I send a cat-call Jess's way while beating my chest animalisticly."
Posted by Alchemist on "Full moon" by Deathkitten
- "That's white man's burden I guess, though I have always been poor so I feel much more like the penny and the grain of sand lost on the white hot beach."
Posted by Alchemist on "Bright White Man" by Deathkitten
- "so your saying that if i try to get inside im going to take a tumble. see most people try to climb the walls only to take a tumble. im smarter than that. i come with a bricksaw cause i just want to peak inside and poke a big enough hole to let some sunshine in. a hole just big enough for my face to fit in so i can peek in and say "hey...jess. what are ya doin" lol...quite the visuals. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "My Wall" by Deathkitten
- "Seems almost impossible. I wish it wasn't this way, but it's hard for me to let anyone in. I guess bc I feel it would never be the same as what I had & nothing else would ever suffice. I don't want to fake it anymore. "
Posted by Deathkitten on "My Wall" by Deathkitten
- "Thank you. Men don't normally try to climb mine, once in awhile they'll stare at it in curiosity, but the women that attempt, they just can't get through. There's only been one...when all I had up was a fence hah.....that one, is the reason for the wall. Some people are scared of heights. Mine are scared of failure & rejection."
Posted by Deathkitten on "My Wall" by Deathkitten
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