Comments by All Members
- "Sometimes it's best to leave things hidden because the truth isn't something that everyone can bare. I'm sure that everyone has a mask on and we all have things to hide. Beautifully crafted piece with honesty and emotion. Loved it : )"
Posted by andhaka on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
- "Much enjoyed..left me with many thoughts..such as if someone did take the time to peek behind the mask and dig deeper would that be good cause for yet another mask..to pick through thick skin..loved that line it left a nice image...we are made up of so many layers..i think that even after someone peels them back..peeks behind the mask..theres still so much more in hiding. Sorry hon..im rambling on now :-) great write."
Posted by River Lily on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
- "I would never call you a liar. Anyway, Happy 4th of July! My Acadia trip starts tomorrow. I'll read you when I get back. Cheers! "
Posted by Unknown on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
- "Awesome post, sometimes people sure as hell don't want to know what's really underneath the mask...they may think they wanna try to remove it to see, but it never ends well when they do...
Incredible writing...
-NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
- "I have got to tell you "You aren't damn Lying !" or maybe you are (ok now that wasn't me, it must be the voice in my head being so scared to ask) ;))"
Posted by Unknown on "Tell me i'm lying..." by Deathkitten
- "At times it can be difficult to imagine what goes on within a perfectly normal seeming persons head, or even if there is anything within at all. Great write DK, love it."
Posted by Unknown on "A numb I can trust" by Deathkitten
- ""i will not
be hushed
speaking
i must"
first few lines mean a lot. what is unspoken is always worse what you need to say is well and true. great poem."
Posted by Unknown on "Who I am" by Deathkitten
- ""Selfish ass" just about says it all in the pantheon of no-nos to a healthy relationship. Keep digging Jess and you will find buried treasure, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Yeah, look at you" by Deathkitten
- "Spontaneous combustion is over-rated. I once considered it but could only muster a bad rash from the prickly heat. This piece speaks to the numbness we all find at the end of our rainbows when life becomes a drudgery beyond tomorrow. Many Hugs coming atchoo, cheers Jess!"
Posted by dwells on "A numb I can trust" by Deathkitten
- "Numbness is a comfortable state to be in.. Nothing can effect you... Sometimes a good explosion is what we need to let it all out. Awesome"
Posted by MissAngelic on "A numb I can trust" by Deathkitten
- "Tally it up & mark the cost
Fuel the pathetic
so they can fill your greed
I got just what you think you need
Well said! I love the emotion in this!"
Posted by Unknown on "Yeah, look at you" by Deathkitten
- "leaving sheets of cotton full of sin and sweat... (every line has a seductiveness feel) I like how you enhance the beauty in something otherwise filthy* Nice write ~^_^~"
Posted by blue angel on ".*Wicked Women*." by Deathkitten
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