[Investing in Me]
By Deathkitten
This human nature sling
is becoming such a strangling thing
Trying to hold me up
in an awkward position
I just might throw up
What part of transition
means staying the same?
Why's there a crack in your voice
when you scream my name?
Was it by choice
to play my game?
Never satisfied
because it's your loss
and my gain
Did you expect me
to tell you what you wanted to hear?
Can't you see
you're getting closer to your fear
when I whisper those words
in your lonely ear
Investing in me
never became so clear
The ripping rage inside
you refuse to hide
keeps sifting through me
until your feelings die
'cause you can't spread your wings
they're too heavy for flight
and with broken bones
you continue to fight
but you're down on luck
and the wounds won't heal
you're just waiting in a storm
drowning until
there's nothing warm
left to kill
Author's Note:
There's a time to live & a time to kill.Awards
Comments on "[Investing in Me]"
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A former member wrote:
A time to live and time to kill? Hehe I like it, I think I may get those times mixed up though. Great write DK, very much enjoyed.
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On Friday, July 5, 2013, haunted
(849) wrote:
you go girl with your bad self..lol...awesome poem jess, you are a pro at knocking people back to reality. and I respect that a lot. because your gospel is truth most of the time as I can always relate in one way or another. awesome!
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
Empowering and disturbingly beautiful ~^_^~
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On Sunday, June 30, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Describing me is fun huh *grins* thanks, Kendra :)
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On Monday, July 1, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
and such a wicked grin it tis' ~^_^~
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Quite a thrill to read! Kept my bottom on the edge drinking up every word! Nicy penned!
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Haha thanks, Brea. Was it filling?
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On Monday, July 1, 2013, poe_lover28
(164) wrote:
Ahh yes very (;
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
"...drowning until there's nothing warm left to kill.." This is honestly one of my favorite posts I have read in awhile...I really like your writing style..can't wait to see more. AMAZING post! thank you for this... -NN
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On Saturday, June 29, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Sweet! Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed :)