Comments by All Members
- "Well now, this is also intriguing interesting. I love lines, "walking contradictions" and , "zombies of trust" the depth of the abstraction is hauntingly beautiful. Well done poet."
Posted by Unknown on "Swallow" by Deathkitten
- "This had the effect of a picture slide, each new image stirring up something different with every line. "
Posted by Unknown on "Swallow" by Deathkitten
- "Irresistible and unstopped attraction, with that small bite included. The die are in the air and on their way down. Splendidly written."
Posted by Unknown on "I double dare you" by Deathkitten
- "What about a triple dog dare? "You recite the book & I know it's been read" great line and great expression kitten, nice to see you back."
Posted by Unknown on "I double dare you" by Deathkitten
- "Fear of heights or possibly an inferiority complex? Recommended reading "Banana Hammock" that I posted last year, cheers and well constructed tribute, especially the heart kiss!
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Posted by dwells on "I'll dance with you" by Deathkitten
- "Faint hearts never won the fair maiden, marvelous words a challenge befitting Sir Lancelot! Much enjoyed as always Jess, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "I double dare you" by Deathkitten
- "Mmmm this is fantastic! Those last two lines in particular stand out to me. Just one after another fall willingly into the arms of the seductive beast, I wonder if they regret it? Aha excellent write."
Posted by Unknown on "Succubus" by Deathkitten
- "This brought up some quite beautiful imagery in my head, serene and calming. Love the sight of leaves being carried by the wind."
Posted by Unknown on "No window l+l" by Deathkitten
- "...your poem is haunting & disturbing. there is a lot of beauty in the world, & also a lot of pain, depending on your perception, & that decides the value of windows..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "No window l+l" by Deathkitten
- "Nurture and care... Wonder if it creates a greater strength than hardship and neglect. Although I guess that would greatly depend on what you would consider as 'strength'. A place to throw all your stress away and lose yourself in the peace of the moment and the rhythmic workings is definitely worthy of the name sanctuary. Quite a wonderful piece this."
Posted by Unknown on "@~My Flower Child~@" by Deathkitten
- "Ah the victims of those with short attention spans, poor things. Who knows ... Sentiment might just win over in the end."
Posted by Unknown on "PLAY-TOY" by Deathkitten
- "Haha curiosity never hurt anyone ;) Wheres the fun without experimenting or exploring a little? Those last three lines wrapped up this wonderfully seductive write quite splendidly."
Posted by Unknown on "(Saturated) " by Deathkitten
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