Comments by All Members
- ""it's only that
they haven't a car
to travel faster
to get away
from what they chase
has turned astray "....I just wanted to print those words in my mind...awesome word play.
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Posted by maddin foxxxy on "little dream" by frost bite
- "My interpretation is that the little boy is representing something inside you, a hope. I can be completely wrong, I often am.. Though I like this alot. Great flow and great story with a good point. ~S"
Posted by Storm on "little dream" by frost bite
- "Damn...Lydia already took what I was gonna say :p This is...well first, the rhythm is amazing. I felt myself flying through it read so smoothly. And the message is just wonderful. This is great frost :)"
Posted by Unknown on "little dream" by frost bite
- "yeah i definately wouldnt call this one crap. showed somepoints of view i have never seenbefore. i really liked it. truly interesting."
Posted by Twilight on "little dream" by frost bite
- "*is now a fav* SO not crap.. i love this so much.. the flow is amazing.. the words were wonderful...i had to read it out loud and then re-read it because it was just ...wow.. and i am honest ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "little dream" by frost bite
- "holy fuck!! i love this one the mostest out of all of your works without a doubt!! im putting it on my fav list right now!!! thank you for this one frost!! ~Lydia~"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "little dream" by frost bite
- "The way this flows is so powerfully captivating. Wow you impressed me muchly with this one. And you're sexy. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "horses eyes" by frost bite
- "LOL I fucking love it! Then again...I'm into this sort of thing...*pondernig whether I should start calling you Captain Frost* :p"
Posted by Unknown on "Captain Frost" by frost bite
- "Damn...The rhythm in this piece had me flying. I'm glad you decided to repost this. I just can't get over the rhythm...this is gonna be stuck in my head :)"
Posted by Unknown on "horses eyes" by frost bite
- "you must like pirates alot or something lol....they are very interesting but i will stick with vampires...~Lydia~"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "Captain Frost" by frost bite
- ""my dream kept me caged for oh so long " YES!!!! that is the line i have been waititng for!! thank you!! ~Lydia~
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Posted by Lydia Jade on "moving on??" by frost bite
- "indeed your metaphores are radiently beautiful...awsome....simply awsome.....you have a wonderful talent...may i rub against you in hope that some of your talent will come off on me?!! ~Lydia~"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "silver caverns" by frost bite
- "a waste of fucking time!! very insightful....i love it!! you have an awsome talent as soon as im done reading the rest of your stuff im sure you will be a new fav of mine!! ~Lydia~"
Posted by Lydia Jade on "horses eyes" by frost bite
- ""excentric blowing mind controlling"
i esp loved this line, not sure why, but i loved it. "
Posted by Unknown on "horses eyes" by frost bite
- "The last stanza hits home. This was a great piece. I enjoyed every single word. Marvelous job. -Doll"
Posted by Unknown on "horses eyes" by frost bite
- "venturing into new worlds and doors is good I have found, however my path has been layed before me and straying from it would have caused to much...suck"
Posted by frost bite on "moving on??" by frost bite
- "Wow.. You use the most beautiful metaphors. This is just stunning. Thankyou for bringing your work to my attention, I take pleasure in putting this one on my favourites. ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "silver caverns" by frost bite
- "This is beautifully written. And I love the repeat of hang, hanging, hung. This just...I just keep reading through it descovering new depths. It's wonderful that you are now back to writing here..."
Posted by Unknown on "silver caverns" by frost bite
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