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summers cries
By frost bite
the frozen thoughts march across the land
resisting total defeat the summer will cry
death soon will come though you try so hard
the battle is fought for the living and dead
but in the end, all living dies to frozen thoughts
this becomes the kingdom of winter, the demise of life
it all starts with winters first fleet...
Autumn
what once was bountiful and full of life
now gone with an overpowering brigade of death, prevailing
this is the most triumphant and beautiful death that can be
covering the land in pure beauty and delight
death may come un-wanted, but once here..
fullfilled
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Copyright 2003 frost bite
Published on Monday, November 10, 2003.
Filed under:
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A former member wrote:
brilliant... love it
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, island warrior
(210)
wrote:
Cool and calculated.
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On Friday, April 23, 2004, darkvamptress
(16) wrote:
veyr nice work i would say
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A former member wrote:
I'm loving you..and I'm loving this poem.
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On Saturday, February 21, 2004, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
awesome poem, good job ~Emptyness~
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On Monday, December 22, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
great!
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On Tuesday, November 18, 2003, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
insightful wisdom...........well done.....urban
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I didn't expect such a thrilling write and such incredible ending...so glad I read this.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, WinterGrave
(258) wrote:
good, damned good...i love the winter(hince the name)...great write.~~~Grave
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, pushblood
(27) wrote:
Thus the growth and death of life.. Most living organisms eventually grow cold and die...Great Read...~P.B~
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, Demosthenes
(155) wrote:
well. looks like DP's got itself one more good poet. welcome to your new home. -B
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A former member wrote:
Dark and beautiful... that's all I can really say. Keep it up! =) xx bleedin stars xx
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