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time withers
By frost bite
pretending, acting, faking, make believe, false advertise
Reveal
laugh outside scream inside
shake a hand to the world rip off an arm within
walk with pride for eyes run into shadows to yours
captivate others alienate yourself
smile to them cry to inner thoughts
look in the mirror to see a smiling face
take off the mask after doing so
then look again
look in the mirror to see a smiling face
maybe time has healed
look in the mirror to see a smiling face
maybe this change is for the best
look at your body, it is withering away..
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Copyright 2003 frost bite
Published on Monday, November 10, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "time withers"
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On Wednesday, June 9, 2004, urbanhumility
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wrote:
your realism does well for your prose........well done..........urban
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A former member wrote:
Gorgeous...absolutely phenomenal.
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A former member wrote:
Really great write. Quite thought-inducing. =0)
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On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
I could really find myself loving each of your writes....I like that type of truth and feeling.....excellent work.
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On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, pushblood
(27) wrote:
I like the repetitive thought. Keeps me guessing. From begging to end I dig the twist.~P.B~
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
I like it, there is a lot going on here, don't discount yourself as a good writer you got talent and it will blossom to it's full one day but you got to just get stuff out there you can never tell your own masterpiece
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
I like the looking into the mirror to see the same smiling face even after the mask was removed, it wasn't what I expected . . I also like the contradicting actions . . I was a little confused at the end but that happens to me sometimes ;) It's an inter
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On Monday, November 10, 2003, cre
(410) wrote:
interesting write, good job.
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