Captain Frost

By frost bite

we sailed the sea for 80 days no treasure to be found
told the captain we'd rebell unless were homeward bound
the captain stood tall and pround and pointed straight ahead
he told us to get back to work or it'll mean our head
OI!
the men were mad and clinched their fist not knowing what to do
so they went on working on the only thing they knew
I told the men to come to me and all to gather round
tonight the captain's with the sharks sleepin on the ground
OI!

I've been around and sailed the seas
with ruling of me hand
no man with brains would even try
to attack me off the sand!

I took the men and gave them work with new hope put within
they swabbed me decks and launched me boat just like a second kin
I lead the men through times of war our ship could not be sunk
before we all knew it we had riches in our bunk!
OI!

I've been around and sailed the seas
with ruling of me hand
no man with brains would even try
to attack me off the sand!

*yes ladies I am the greatest pirate to sail the seven seas, even the arctic was ruled by me hand, no snow or ice could slow me down!*... Jack Sparrow who?? you will now refer to the greatest pirate as Captain Frost, but you can call me frost bite if ya like! YAR!

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Copyright 2003 frost bite
Published on Monday, November 10, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I found myself lost in it... nice story line and use of Rymne Sceam.. Rachel aka hopeless_mortal

  • A former member wrote: i loved the flow of this one. really awesome. excellent story, nice work.

  • A former member wrote: LOL I fucking love it! Then again...I'm into this sort of thing...*pondernig whether I should start calling you Captain Frost* :p

  • A former member wrote: Yay for pirates!

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Yarrrghhh, I be the Greatest Pirate ya mangy, scurvy ridden, scallywag....Yarrrgghhh -Captain Dan Xaos ISA Kataklysm

  • Storm On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, Storm (143)By person wrote:

    Write a book about pirates! For one I'd read it... A bit different and therefore worth to read (over and over again). /Storm

  • frost bite On Wednesday, November 12, 2003, frost bite (43)By person wrote:

    I have many attempts at pirate short stories, but none worthy of posting heh

  • WinterGrave On Tuesday, November 11, 2003, WinterGrave (258)By person wrote:

    lol, vary entertaining, ilove it.~~~Grave

  • Midnight Phoenix On Monday, November 10, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240)By person wrote:

    Definately a fun piece.

  • Six-Out On Monday, November 10, 2003, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    ARRRGH!!!

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