Comments by All Members
- "This is an astoundingly wrought metaphor... crafted in clever beauty..... thou that art to thought, nourishment, like darkness to a dying flame....beautifully striking as a stanza from Shelley.... *bows with gratitude* thank you for this sharp flash into the sublime..... well deserved POTD."
Posted by Unknown on "Pocketlife" by purr_verse
- "hahhaaha loved it!
a lighthearted witty piece on a subject that can be a tad annoying.
well done.
thanks for sharing.
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Posted by natalie on "Flaccid" by purr_verse
- "Congratulations, Purr! This is so deserving, such an absolute masterpiece.. "Maps are mere suggestions. This city will not be where I found it yesterday." So beautiful, love the wandering tone of this poem..just perfect. "
Posted by Unknown on "deConstruction Time Again, redux" by purr_verse
- "congrats...and this is so precision.wicked crafted and images drape off images like sunsets turning into gauzy midnights full of trains and freudian.slips.....adored your words from the beginning.....blessings [and jealousies :) ]"
Posted by Unknown on "deConstruction Time Again, redux" by purr_verse
- ""This city will not be where I found it yesterday." You know how I feel. I love this "Redux" version (& am reminded, to a point, of another author yet your reason for the changes are of a most different nature... still, I am in awe of these changes). U deserve that Berlin poetica trip! To slipstream Unter den Linden, blister in the sunset mirrors. Berlin will take you! Someday, perhaps, you'll take Manhattan. For now to be wrapped in the photograph-cranes of satisfaction, in the German tongue, "this surrogate reality, this slipstream city". The perfect last stanza for this redux, "I've been lost for daze". Berlin Daze. Don't forget to breathe, as you walk, "frame-by-frame" into Zoo Station. Brilliantly awarded, rewarded, deserved. Only the best poets have things of this nature happen to them. Well done. Bravouros!!! "
Posted by jonLyndon on "deConstruction Time Again, redux" by purr_verse
- "Berlin Days... so honest, and rare; so deserving of the trip won to Berlin this poem you've written has granted you. A poem so worthy of it's recognition. You might not have taken Berlin, but Berlin is taking you (for a September! "faraway/so close"). Bravo!!!"
Posted by jonLyndon on "Triptych I: deConstruction Time Again" by purr_verse
- "well put together. i enjoyed the way u seem to poke fun at exceptional things, both great and small. funny how easily we forget to be awed by all the wonders around us until we are dying, lose one of our senses, or the beauty is destroyed.
bravo!!
"
Posted by natalie on "glorious, diminished" by purr_verse
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