Comments by All Members
- "This piece did exactly what it should. It moved me. Despite the direction is the reminder of my own anger, or in other words my painful longing, it still moved me. Hopefully you're arrows have gone out."
Posted by MESUN on "Flamming Arrows" by Quovis
- "Honest, simple, the real deal. The flow was ok, and the arrow is ok to use even if somewhat old. All in all. Enjoyed. Tiger"
Posted by Blinded_Tiger on "Flamming Arrows" by Quovis
- "i guess this poem just lacks further exploration...I feel there are some missing lines to ease the flow from one odd verse to the next...either way, it boils down to feeling so if this expressed what you felt at the momemt then it is all that matters....-"
Posted by Spiritus_Frumenti on "Partial thoughts of a broken reality" by Quovis
- "Some of it indeed made no sense... Rose Glasses? But the message regardless is clear, the strange seemingly inane insertions seem to give this a profundity it would otherwise lack... I enjoyed it :)"
Posted by Solace on "Partial thoughts of a broken reality" by Quovis
- "This is like a call for help. "I can feel death’s breath upon my wrists" I like. ~Wish"
Posted by Unknown on "Want Ad" by Quovis
- "Very intense, passionate and haunting. ~Wish Upon A Star "
Posted by Unknown on "Fog" by Quovis
- "Wow, this is brilliant. I love that last line: "I Die, and when I Die, I am happy." I can't get it out of my head! ~Wish Upon A Star"
Posted by Unknown on "I DREAM..." by Quovis
- "i like the idea of it being a ^want ad^. this is a good read. i liked it. ~Drea~"
Posted by Drea on "Want Ad" by Quovis
- "great poem!.. love the twist, didnt know it was coming.. "
Posted by yslehc on "Fog" by Quovis
- "its hard to keep up the stone facade. Sometimes trying to stay so strong makes you even weaker. Nice write. :::OLd"
Posted by OLd SouL on "Tears Shed By Night" by Quovis
