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Partial thoughts of a broken reality
By Quovis
What light I had grows dim
Someone stole my Rose Glasses
I once loved a boy... he called me pretty things
This food tastes horrible
lover's kisses
I bought new eyes today
Black glasses
The sun is so bright
Better to stay in the shadows
(I dont even know if this was supposed to make sense. But for some reason
it has meaning to me)
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Copyright 2004 Quovis
Published on Thursday, January 15, 2004.
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340)
wrote:
i guess this poem just lacks further exploration...I feel there are some missing lines to ease the flow from one odd verse to the next...either way, it boils down to feeling so if this expressed what you felt at the momemt then it is all that matters....-
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Some of it indeed made no sense... Rose Glasses? But the message regardless is clear, the strange seemingly inane insertions seem to give this a profundity it would otherwise lack... I enjoyed it :)
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, Quovis
(8) wrote:
Rose tinted glasses.. like if a person is only able to see the good in things it is said that they are wearing rose colored glasses.. or atleast I think so
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On Wednesday, January 21, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
ok you learn something every day, i'll have to remember that... Makes more sense now :)
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, capt_funguy
(777) wrote:
that's the case with rose colored glasses , an optimist , a pollyanna .... i loved this piece , and i'm glad i stumbled upon it - thanks ... funguy
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