Comments by All Members
- "Wow, I feel like I was reading something real. Not just something that sounded good."
Posted by Mari on "Land Mines" by Lemons
- "superb images and iconic allegory....with gritted teeth and crossed fingers, this felt wired and trapped shut."
Posted by Unknown on "Land Mines" by Lemons
- "It's 4:25 in the morning. I'm having a long online discussion with the love of my life because he can't seem to deliver words to me that cristalize his feelings... And then, not knowing what to do with myself while we talked, I put "random" and came across your poem. Thank-you. You made me realize a fallacy that all of us poets have: we expect it all in beautiful words and charming verse. Sometime, maybe, I'll evolve and learn that, like e.e cummings once said "feeling is first". Such a simple poem.. yet so meaningful!"
Posted by Unknown on "Change" by Lemons
- "Seriously, you are giving me goosebumps with these wholly affecting writes of yours. Superb. Beyond so. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Land Mines" by Lemons
- "Again, absolutely wonderful versing here. You've a strong grasp of the written word. Eloquent and effecting. High praise. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Change" by Lemons
- "I surely echo that. Outstanding, simply outstanding. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Sex" by Lemons
- "like the key all the way at the right of the piano ... if you tap that key ... i'm gonna smile ... like tapping someone's mom ... it works every time.. funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Song" by Lemons
- "this was great ... clarity with a flashpoint in a language that tells me what i want to hear, in a way i love to hear it ... great, great .... funguy"
Posted by capt_funguy on "Land Mines" by Lemons
- "wow, well.. this grabbed me quite forcefully, I'll go ahead and take my own meanings to heart. Thank you. ~b"
Posted by blue on "Origami Cranes" by Lemons
- "subtle variatian of a theme - nothing too arcane; bittersweet and full of human evaluation"
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Marks" by Lemons
- "commentary on her marks in the sand... somehow looking back on her making of marks as if it were foolish... the marks will not last, the beach will not be deserted forever... hmmmm the "as if" as wonderfully vague and enticing as an "as if" could be... ni"
Posted by Unknown on "Marks" by Lemons
- "it's the "as if" that draws me in to this... I mean, does she leave marks in the sand, like clawing to get out because winter could last forever? or is the beach deserted and cold... as dead as forever? or maybe the as if winter could last forever is comm"
Posted by Unknown on "Marks" by Lemons
- "maybe we don't need poetry in this life, we just are dysfunctional fuck wits with emotionally destructive tendencies..."
Posted by The Zebra Warrior on "Change" by Lemons
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