Land Mines

By Lemons

The world is full of empathy,
and other words to round up my vocabulary
Feeling is not some kind of tragedy
a refreshing play where we all end up dead;

And your apathy
translates to me as
land mines in my favored field,
a garden built to make me heal,
I wish to plant my deflowers
but every flower is perishing
because there’s gun powder in the dirt.

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© 2006 Lemons
Published on Sunday, November 5, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mari On Thursday, December 15, 2011, Mari (419)By person wrote:

    Wow, I feel like I was reading something real. Not just something that sounded good.

  • A former member wrote: superb images and iconic allegory....with gritted teeth and crossed fingers, this felt wired and trapped shut.

  • blue On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Seriously, you are giving me goosebumps with these wholly affecting writes of yours. Superb. Beyond so. ~b

  • capt_funguy On Saturday, June 23, 2007, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    this was great ... clarity with a flashpoint in a language that tells me what i want to hear, in a way i love to hear it ... great, great .... funguy

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