Change

By Lemons

The world is changing and maybe
we won’t need poetry in the afterlife
we will release our emotions into
eachother a rush or lust and then
everything here is wonderful
I’ll never ask you about love
it won’t be important and maybe
that’s why we wouldn’t use poetry
because words would be failing me
in comparison to you.

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© 2006 Lemons
Published on Friday, August 4, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Dilated View On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Dilated View (582)By person wrote:

    Gorgeous and I hope you are correct :)

  • Lydia Jade On Tuesday, December 29, 2009, Lydia Jade (1332)By person wrote:

    what he said

  • A former member wrote: It's 4:25 in the morning. I'm having a long online discussion with the love of my life because he can't seem to deliver words to me that cristalize his feelings... And then, not knowing what to do with myself while we talked, I put "random" and came across your poem. Thank-you. You made me realize a fallacy that all of us poets have: we expect it all in beautiful words and charming verse. Sometime, maybe, I'll evolve and learn that, like e.e cummings once said "feeling is first". Such a simple poem.. yet so meaningful!

  • blue On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    Again, absolutely wonderful versing here. You've a strong grasp of the written word. Eloquent and effecting. High praise. ~b

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