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"sounds like a good ol' fashioned healthy addiction...."
Posted by Twilight on "Taste of You(in my veins)" by SGT Bloth

"i hated my grandpa!!! but yours sound so wonderful. he must have been a nice man. and very sweet of you to write a tribute to him. and this piece is well written. i like it. :)"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"lol... this cracked me up. and the words in caps put the idea of your poem forward. very nice. :)"
Posted by aXe FactoR on "BLOOD LUST(STUPID WHORE!)" by SGT Bloth

"has a certain element of skipping so pleasently... a bit of a tra la la to it.... awesome. Sue"
Posted by Mute Serenade on "Hunting" by SGT Bloth

"Twisted, yes...and a tad disturbing, it seems so sinister and justified in its own, I like it very much *~seraph~*"
Posted by Seraphic on "Hunting" by SGT Bloth

"..even if it does rhyme, and simple proofreading would also improve your work."
Posted by Liz on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"Sometimes writing helps, somethings emotion makes things more beautiful, and sometimes such things require much more work. I think you have good material to draw from, but I have to say "I even made it through taps, to boot" is AWFUL..."
Posted by Liz on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"...twisted, yet humorous...I like this... -Darun"
Posted by SilentStalker on "Hunting" by SGT Bloth

"this one is true it makes it hard and easy too write , at the samt=e time "
Posted by SGT Bloth on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"mmmmmmm the elemtn of surprise such a dark, sexy stalker...awaiting..the pounce once again...*grins evilly* mmmm indeed"
Posted by A Velvet Tongue on "From the Tower (Where Have You Gone)" by SGT Bloth

"How beautifully ironic this is... again, good job. The words are your oyster... (whatever the hell that means.. but it sounds good, doesn't it?) *grin* what I mean is: this is another awesome work of yours... _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Lucky Me(burning in Hell)" by SGT Bloth

"This hit home and hard... thank you for sharing this... _Raven"
Posted by Raven on "Taste of You(in my veins)" by SGT Bloth

"wrong velvet you do know someone in the army...Me"
Posted by SGT Bloth on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"This was written with such strength, no gaps in the polished rhythm or shaky spots of uncontrolled words...a great work for sure. ~JMDW~"
Posted by CharlottesWeb on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"I don't know anyone in the army, and I never saw anyone die in front of me, but your poem helped me know how it feels... Very well written! Velvet."
Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "I'll Take it From Here Sarge (Rest well Grandpa) a tear jerker" by SGT Bloth

"WOW! thats cool lol! good work i like it a lot"
Posted by Unknown on "BLOOD LUST(STUPID WHORE!)" by SGT Bloth

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