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- "you read my work thought i would read yours..very nice i hope to read more
by the way.. i like your pic very cool you make a real King Of The Night "
Posted by Unknown on "FLEDGLING" by matteus
- "Perfect. Mysterious effect, so right on this. Night holds the key to many wonders and secrets as well as a kind of alteration in us. Our dreams are most certainly the thing that completes it, we grow, we learn... such a transformation. "
Posted by Symbol on "Transformationem et Mortuus" by matteus
- "the Parsi community in India leave their dead atop towers for the vultures to eat ... this practice is not so popular these days among the non-Parsi community, they keep dropping bits on the suburbs and the vultures are in decline :( ... I'm sure that's not what was in your mind when you wrote this but you made me think of my own wishes...is this an option if you don't want to be buried or burned? ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "FLEDGLING" by matteus
- "Symbol pretty much summed it up with the good advice ... 'tis a very emotional piece, I can feel that ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Numb" by matteus
- "You are so beautiful!! I enjoy reading everything you write "beware my stare for I will capture your soul" excellence is you dear matteus"
Posted by Unknown on "returning to hopelessness " by matteus
- "i see you have a fascination for the dramatic, and vampire tales. out of them all, i like this one best. the wording really jumped out of the page. thanks for sharing, and welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Man in the Mirror" by matteus
- ""Even though something cannot be seen does not mean it cannot be felt" I agree with this line 100 % of the way. And sadly, yes, we cannot always forget some things... no matter how hard we try. I guess we just have to come to accept them as hard as it may be and move on with life... you can try to mend what has been done, but sometimes that may just worsen it... but saying that doesn't mean it will necessarily happen. Great write. Deep. "
Posted by Symbol on "Damn" by matteus
- "It really digs deep. Nice work! I loved reading this."
Posted by Unknown on "Damn" by matteus
- "Rejection is a bugger, it has always worried me and I suppose many others when it comes to love, and the fact of not wanting to talk to whom you love, becomes a fear, because believing that expressing your emotions will cause everything to fall apart and hearing the horrid "no". I have noticed from personal experience that even with this fear, a fear one may run from, because of the intense desire of wanting someone so bad- it keeps you there- hanging on. I learned if you don't ask, tell, express whatever you want to say, you will live with this fear. for the rest of your life.. it is all about facing it... if you don't, you'll never know, right? and sometimes to the other person- the silence from you could feel like a rejection too. Because who knows... perhaps the one you like has feelings for you too. Build up the courage... and swallow up that fear. Try. Great write. I really felt your real emotions poured out into this piece and what this one you love does to you ^ ^ I loved it... thank you for the read... I can heavily relate..."
Posted by Symbol on "Numb" by matteus
- "I have always wanted to go to a ball, whether it be with the dead or not it would still be awesome. You have some great sytle of writing Count Matteus :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Grande Masquerade" by matteus
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