Comments by All Members
- "nice voice, tone... a maturation of thought, maybe, from your previous ones, or maybe, just another way of expressing yourself less cryptically. I like the colloquial style. Certainly memoirs that grow into the psyche and choke out perennially... the persona here is growing thorns... which are really just little horns, maybe? an enjoyable and flawless composition, thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
- "admittedly I had to look up ameliorating, heh. it is tough to watch someone you've been close to move on with their lives, especially when you can't seem to, but they do so with such ease. tis a bad feeling. that's what this poem brought to mind. thanks."
Posted by Patches on "Ameliorating me to Deaf" by Maladroit
- "I recall a student once disbelieving that 'ameliorate' was a word.. heh... hold that candor... a cerebral rewind... I wonder, this brought to mind someone who can 'forgive' but can't forget, to me... as if the past were always on the table, and there was no moving beyond past disagreements, maybe... interesting read, cryptic and caustic. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Ameliorating me to Deaf" by Maladroit
- "Oh and one more thing.. I think by far you are one of the best writers.. ANd my grammar sucks ass and I still haven't learned to spell everything right but I dig the fuck out of you. "
Posted by Devilish on "Ameliorating me to Deaf" by Maladroit
- "Binge drink on your ego and so many do until they pass out but will never throw up what makes them sick."
Posted by Alchemist on "Organic You" by Maladroit
- "You are a very powerful writer I have been waiting for someone of your talent for love poetry to grace this site but your work is so much more than that aswell. I imagined every wet dream being a mistress and the eternal guilt I would have if my wife only knew about them. On a lighter note my wife is very cool and probably wouldn't care, lol."
Posted by Alchemist on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "Welcome to The Valley and I have to agree with the others please stay awhile and share more of your beauty with the people of Dark Poetry."
Posted by Alchemist on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "...pick dreams from the hearts of dreamers, scatter them like shells on the beach. ( & I see a magazine ad for sunscreen)..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "such a moment of seeming bliss... seemingly turned into a sinister guffaw at the less than courageous met with a form of indifferent disdain, perhaps. The second stanza seemed to suggest a longer relationship than 7 seeings, to me... and the last seemed to bring about a sarcastic tone of derogatory description.... an interesting read. thanks."
Posted by The Dybbuk on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "The brutal honesty makes this piece drive itself thru the psyche of the reader. Excellent work. "
Posted by Temerity on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "love that second stanza!! it made the whole piece for me. thank you for sharing."
Posted by natalie on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "I so hate you .. I am in the process of purchasing a motor vehicle .. Along with a friend finder attached to the dash and your scent I could possibly be in your area soon.. Your an amazing writer .. I bow .. "
Posted by Devilish on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "Oh, my. New Favorite. I loved this, and I know exactly how it feels. Weary for the wanting of a heart done withered. Excellent work."
Posted by Unknown on "Entropy" by Maladroit
- "I would let you eat me alive because something grand would come from the groveling. Please, stick around."
Posted by Poetic-Realm on "Entropy" by Maladroit
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