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- "Haven't heard of them "floaties" in years, since the Red Cross swimming lessons for my daughters. The age-old battle of He and She will ever be (Rodin should have had a lady for a model of "The Thinker") - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Allocating Sun Rays" by Maladroit
- "this reaches so many searching hands but they all come to clear focus. the second and last stanza floored me. the pieces all just fall into place, no stone left uncovered. you offer just the right portion, no unneeded words or making smoke signals, no circling and recircling the point. you write like an excellent chess player, a disciple of sun tzu. great vision, forward thinking, understanding of your opponent and yourself, driven method, balance, humility. it is a rare treat to have you post again so soon. thank you."
Posted by Unknown on "Allocating Sun Rays" by Maladroit
- "Balloons for breakfast and Emerson for dessert... that's one hell of a catchy line right there! Love this:)
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Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Box" by Maladroit
- "Your one-liners here are gold. Also you seem to "paint" rather tan just write. Great visualizations :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Sex with a Twin" by Maladroit
- "You strike me as an interesting person :) I relate to the feeding lions and removing burdens of ants, the two extremes are something that frequent my life a lot and it emphasizes how many things are worth doing. ~Ash"
Posted by Ashteroth on "Alley Cat Habits" by Maladroit
- ""But nobody cries in Vera Wang linens." This line stood out the most for me. It showed a near shame to grief, or shame of loss. I love this poem, well done, my wide eyed doe.
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Posted by Unknown on "Kudzu Memoir" by Maladroit
- "How superbly you have captured the feel of the movement and how unhindered the stream of your thoughts flow."
Posted by Unknown on "Ensorcelling " by Maladroit
- "I like your poem, it has some very effective lines in it. Also, I don’t know if u care, but I have accidentally noticed that the word “sensiblity†is missing one of its bones."
Posted by Dreamscape on "Alley Cat Habits" by Maladroit
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