Comments by All Members
- "perhaps I read this on your previous profile , it seems familiar and it is something I have tried to envision , to imagine the enormous strength of will required to act ... and what then may follow ... eerily calm piece , thank you..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Seppuku" by dalphon
- "such a staunch and gritty guardian ... I like what you did here , it's rather compelling ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "Gargoyle" by dalphon
- "This message is deep. We must not be so selfish, give light to the ones who lost their way to bring harmony"
Posted by Unknown on "Light Bearer" by dalphon
- "thanks. I find inspiration in odd places and when it strikes I just let it flow through and onto the page."
Posted by dalphon on "What's the Score?" by dalphon
- "Wonderful. I love your narations and the words you choose. Really, really nice. What is love, if but a torment after all."
Posted by Unknown on "What's the Score?" by dalphon
- "I appreciate your comments. I had started it with Dear Master, but I didn't want it to seem like it was directed at a specific person.."
Posted by dalphon on "Love, Your Slave" by dalphon
- "This poem is pretty out there I do agree but it is great! I know exactly that fear of putting your love out there in fear of rejection... that damn fear... *sighs* Great write. Nicely composed."
Posted by Symbol on "More than expected..." by dalphon
- "this is my personal favorite of my own writing.. and I let her know why everyday :)"
Posted by dalphon on "Abducted" by dalphon
- "I love how you made it as a letter, this poem. Signing it as " Love,
Your Slave." Well done. Great piece."
Posted by Symbol on "Love, Your Slave" by dalphon
- "Wow, your words are so meaningful and beautiful. Well done on this piece. Glad you shared it. :)"
Posted by Symbol on "Abducted" by dalphon
- "I swim through the void,
Bathing in the bitter cold of alone.
.........fucking priceless.. hello there you.. i appreciate your comments and love your poetry. "
Posted by Devilish on "Abducted" by dalphon
- "The last verse and the comment of the author - maybe the best bits of this Work. Tragic, true and good reading for any sleepless night.
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Posted by DavidVale on "Light Bearer" by dalphon
- "i had read a journal entry from a year ago and did my best to recreate what I felt when I wrote that day."
Posted by dalphon on "Work to be Done." by dalphon
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