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- "i'll tame you, little fox. *pets* you are loved... there is such clarity to the despair in this.. made me cry... you awe me at 15. i love to watch you find your voice."
Posted by Unknown on "Child of the Wild" by devilsrighthand
- "Wow!! ' take my hand to the gun and pull my life away ' That staggered me... I had to re read it a few times. The words aren't what get me, its the pure honest emotion behind them. Very raw. Loved it. 10/10"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "Just Gotta Run Away" by devilsrighthand
- "This spoke volumes to me... I know this emotion better than any other... I turn to rage because it eases the pain ( only briefly ) and inflicts it on someone else. I want so badly for someone else to feel an ounce of what I'm feeling and then just turn around and walk away like everyone did to me.
Do two wrongs make a right.......???"
Posted by Fallenfromgrace on "The Beast Inside" by devilsrighthand
- "The last line really sets it all off.
This poem is full of conflict, the push and pull feeling of 'am I dreaming or not?'
The quick flow and rhymes really suit it, nice work."
Posted by Unknown on "Closed mind" by devilsrighthand
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