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"From out of the darkness, warriors come forth ! I feel your heart lies in this write my lady ! Awesome ! "
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Dark Lullabye For You " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"One woman. One man. There is no room for anything, or anyone else my lady. You know what you give, you know what you receive. If your not this persons everything, then this person, deceives, even himself ! Our spirits know how others feel about us my lady, do all things that bring you happiness, and those that love you, will already be doing this ! HIC sumus ! ...give no one your wings !! "
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "To Be In Love With You" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"My lady, always go with your heart, that little voice, that awesome inter feeling. Let your spirit Peirce through the ones that they give warning to your beautiful spirit ! For there is great decernment in your soul ! For it always sees through others deception ! Only give to those who give equal or more back to you ! This is balance ! And when it's not as it seems, walk away, for your true heart is near !!! Awesome work my lady, and we know you are very spiritual..."
Posted by 13sonsofgod on "Never As It Seems " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"Pain and sorrow repeating itself like a broken record and distorted more and more with each loop."
Posted by Divine hell on "Tragic Tune" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I enjoyed this poem, some intense feelings brought on here nice write."
Posted by Divine hell on "The Architect " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I love the simple metered rhyme that this piece holds throughout. Itâ€™s hard to not shield ones truths and state them so directly. Wonderful. "
Posted by Adagios on "Never As It Seems " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"Can tell this came from deep within beautiful write, Hope you felt better after writing this."
Posted by Divine hell on "Never As It Seems " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I'm feeling blue... Great write"
Posted by Dejected_Worth on "Never As It Seems " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"Uh oh. Is there ganna be a cat fight in the to be continued? I can imagine this is a lot more common at weddings than anyone will ever admit! An interesting start to what I'm guessing has more to come. Nicely done :)"
Posted by Dilated View on "Never As It Seems " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

""Almost like my brain is clockwork and memories are the gears" awesome line and awesome poem. Thank you for sharing"
Posted by Divine hell on "Every Thing I Shouldn't Say " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I think itâ€™s all the things we donâ€™t say that land us in these painful places at times. "
Posted by Unknown on "Every Thing I Shouldn't Say " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I understand this on a deep level from the past. This piece is amazing in its depth and thought, thank you. "
Posted by LyricalPheonix6 on "Every Thing I Shouldn't Say " by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"You darling have an aquatic flow that delivers me into darkness .. * kisses * .. "
Posted by Devilish on "The Broken Hearted's Anthem (Rose's Greatest Hits)" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"This was incredible. If I didnâ€™t know, I would have just assumed it was one great poem. Well done."
Posted by Kaiser Black on "The Broken Hearted's Anthem (Rose's Greatest Hits)" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"If I didn't know that this was a combination of poems, I'd think it was only one and a very deep and emotional one at that. Great entry! - 10"
Posted by 10 Forty Three on "The Broken Hearted's Anthem (Rose's Greatest Hits)" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

"I really liked this and it's an excellent entry. So very well worked and stitched together."
Posted by carlosjackal on "The Broken Hearted's Anthem (Rose's Greatest Hits)" by RoseTheBrokenHearted

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