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"Indeed a very excellent write. You've displayed the unspeakable thoughts that have run through my mind quite well. Many was there a time I wish I could of had that dismal cliff to overlook."
Posted by Deviated09 on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker

"I have at times felt like this...for me was hard to put into words but you have described everything perfectly....excellent write"
Posted by Black Velvet Rose on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker

"Inspirational Unde and always enjoy your stuff, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Shattered Walls" by Undertaker

"awesome work dude"
Posted by Unknown on "Shattered Walls" by Undertaker

"Sounds like you've got some backwards and upside down ideas, but then this is in fact Dark Poetry and to each his own. Wondering why you might be so bitter? Anyway, very heartfelt piece, with some descriptive darkness form the depths, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Shadows Ravaging Minds" by Undertaker

"very dark. it's like a key opening a door to some place in our darkest minds. thanks for this!"
Posted by violetdarkness on "The Shadows Ravaging Minds" by Undertaker

"This is beautiful, and chess is awesome so cheers to that"
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

"Very nice. I'm with Natalie on this. Love it. "
Posted by ColorMeToxic on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

"And here I thought you were majoring in mortuary science (HA)! Liked the apocalyptic beginning very much, good tale well told."
Posted by dwells on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"I can never seem to get it straight sometimes. HAHA Like so many mistakes I find. Thankyou I appreciate it"
Posted by Undertaker on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"Now I'm diggin the new title."
Posted by A Dispelled Truth on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"At first I was like, "To Destroyer of Worlds".... interesting, but I see you've changed it. And I liked the topic, very nice poem, thanks for sharing."
Posted by A Dispelled Truth on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"Typical cupid, brings a bow & arrow to a gunfight. I'd love to say that someday, right before I blew it away. Awesome writing, U. later -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"get him! he is the culprit behind many woeful hearts. sorry for your pain; the one i know brought this (delightfully?) sad piece to life."
Posted by natalie on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"Ohhh i have felt the same way for years, pinning over someone who can't and will never return the love you have for them.....Damned Cupid i do so agree"
Posted by Black Velvet Rose on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"It is a terrible pain, loving one whom doesn't love in return. I love the anger directed at "that damned fiend". This poem makes me smile for all the wrong reasons. Thanks for the post!"
Posted by The_Broken_Fox_2112 on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"Blaming it on Cupid, but I think you really know the culprit since you said as much in the first five lines, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"Welcome to DP. From what you posted so far, I enjoyed this one the most. You have very good potential with all the imagery. If I may, I'd recommend a final once over for grammatical stuff (its petty I know, but helps alot). Looking forward to more :)"
Posted by OLd SouL on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"Great words of expression"
Posted by Unknown on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

"The objects of our affection are indeed our goals of perfection, or perception. Hoping she returns you heartfelt longings in kind, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

"i will never look upon a game of chess th esame. welcome to dp."
Posted by natalie on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

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