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"This is beautiful. "
Posted by Unknown on "Expendable Game" by Undertaker

"I would really like to see an author's note for this because It was quite good. This poem moves me "
Posted by Unknown on "Echos of the noiseless cry" by Undertaker

"A cognitive postcard from somewhere another mind has been. Thank you. "
Posted by bpathos on "Expendable Game" by Undertaker

"Visually horrifying...Artfully written!. It was a choice my Mother made... "
Posted by blue angel on "Expendable Game" by Undertaker

""leave purple alone what did his ears ever do to you?" - love that line! Ciao, T/S"
Posted by TropicalSnowstorm on "horoscopes and fireflies" by Undertaker

"Not sure that will make things better and wondering what she might say? Peace brother, and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Expendable Game" by Undertaker

"i do like this... quite often things are chambered and when released are more broken than they were to begin with...."
Posted by BlackVelvet Rose on "Expendable Game" by Undertaker

"How splendid a pen. lovely "
Posted by PoetessDarkly on "Shattered Walls" by Undertaker

"I was completely engrossed in this. Great write:)"
Posted by Killerdemonchick on "Beauty has no Cure" by Undertaker

"I am bewondersmitten and truthgrinned. This has heat to it. Great flow. What a stream. "
Posted by bpathos on "horoscopes and fireflies" by Undertaker

"The flow of the words really made this stand out to me. Nicely done. "
Posted by Unknown on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker

"Still loving it :3"
Posted by Symbol on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"What an inspiring ending~ Don't give up~ Great work here. "
Posted by Symbol on "horoscopes and fireflies" by Undertaker

"Amazing job, well done!!!"
Posted by Unknown on "horoscopes and fireflies" by Undertaker

"Quite an inspirational taste to it. Nice work here. "
Posted by Symbol on "Shattered Walls" by Undertaker

"A fine description of apocalyptic terror."
Posted by Ortolan on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"That was an amazing read. Thank you Undertaker for posting that, the ending is what makes it wonderful. I've heard the hopeless questioning of soldiers wondering why they be spared, but adding the hope of something possibly beautiful - 2 people finding each other can help each other find answers or at least solace in a world of violence and chaotic carnage...beautiful - XXOO"
Posted by Nehema on "Destruction's hope" by Undertaker

"When i wrote it i had a sort of apocolipitc feeling to it, and like a man that acts all tough, and yet when he finds a defenseless girl, and has a shot at being a father almost. haha, there is always a chance for a new start :) thankyou sym"
Posted by Undertaker on "Destruction's hope" by Undertaker

"Sounding like a bit of guilt in the beginning then it bloomed into some kind of romantic hope- Dunno if that makes sense. ;) Aw well I try. I love the last line though... "
Posted by Symbol on "Destruction's hope" by Undertaker

"Wow! A very poignant piece. Such detail of malice deserves a hard 10."
Posted by Unknown on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"Deep. Beautiful rhythm all the way through. I give it a ten 'cause I can ;P"
Posted by Symbol on "You are Called" by Undertaker

"GAHHH! OH MY GOSH! Bookmark! Bookmark! Holy cow. Total ten! XD"
Posted by Symbol on "Evil Legions, Destroyers of Worlds" by Undertaker

"This is amazing Niles :D Lovely rhyme going on here. I shall bring that little fiend cupid down, and snap all his arrows! Ha- great write seriously man. Cheers ;)"
Posted by Symbol on "A game of Darts, for damned Hearts" by Undertaker

"Spectacularly powerful write. I really thought this line was accurate 'it doesnt matter how big you feel sometime... somewhere... you will fear' Love it, cheers man. ;) "
Posted by Symbol on "enjoy...simply...this play " by Undertaker

"Wow, amazing stuff Under. ;) Love it as usual."
Posted by Symbol on "The Plagued Soul" by Undertaker

"Like how you incorporated a chess game into the poem- ^ ^ real clever. Otherwise everything else is perfect. :) "
Posted by Symbol on "Beauty is but Despair" by Undertaker

"Stranger in a strange land, easy to get lost and lose your way, so sad and I know her too - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Beauty has no Cure" by Undertaker

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