Comments by All Members
- "Don't play with matches now, at least there's a roof over your head. Tomorrow will be better, eventually, cheers. Welcome to DP."
Posted by dwells on "Home Sweet Home" by ladyofsorrow
- "lady...it seems you need changes,i think if you feel like that,i think it is your time to risk everything and make the big move,make your home.most of us feel like this,maybe even worst,it touched me because i am not good either,welldone lady"
Posted by Unknown on "Home Sweet Home" by ladyofsorrow
- "Hi and not sure now if typos or spelling, perhaps spellchecker would help in the future? Here are the correct words (I think) and you are a good sport thanks: weeps, too weak, hoping, praying, bear, leaving, cruel - cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The pain that River feels " by ladyofsorrow
- "Hi and if I may a few typos tripped me up, but not so much as to detract from the raw emotion in this piece and the picture you painted with the words. Brought back sad memories of River Phoenix for some reason, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The pain that River feels " by ladyofsorrow
- "Think you might have left something out of the penultimate line ("no one left" maybe?). Much enjoyed as was hoping to see the little ones but alas it was not to be. They must be well-mannered to have their own plates too. This was great, thanks and welcome to DP!"
Posted by dwells on "The children are ready to feed" by ladyofsorrow
- "Oh how i l know the children are ready to eat. Most of the time it is not want they to eat but never the less.. They get fed.. another hello to you.. I think your profile pic is absolutely sick and i love it.."
Posted by Devilish on "The children are ready to feed" by ladyofsorrow
- "well alrighty then. it is definitely something to ponder .. thank you .. and welcome to Darkpoetry.."
Posted by Devilish on "The Fear" by ladyofsorrow
