The children are ready to feed

By ladyofsorrow

Walk with me as we stroll this path of darkness along the way you may be afraid for i am full of sadness.
But i need the walk i need the talkĀ  for the children are ready to feed. Theres no one left just only me so lets walk and talk please.
Theres so much to say yet little time to say it for the children are hungry and ready to feed.
As we walk you will see the chains ropes and cords to trees but please dont mind it were almost there for its 3am and the children are ready to feed.
and as we reach the end of the road IM sorry for it is your time to go.
The moon is full the night is warm the air is still sorry sir for i must say it is my time to kill.
Theres no one around just you and me sadly to say it wont be me.
if you look ahead you will see the plates are ready for the children are ready to feed.

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Copyright 2012 ladyofsorrow
Published on Wednesday, February 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Magdalena On Thursday, February 23, 2012, Magdalena (616)By person wrote:

    Great write... Welcome to DP.

  • dwells On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, dwells (4288)By person wrote:

    Think you might have left something out of the penultimate line ("no one left" maybe?). Much enjoyed as was hoping to see the little ones but alas it was not to be. They must be well-mannered to have their own plates too. This was great, thanks and welcome to DP!

  • Devilish On Wednesday, February 22, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Oh how i l know the children are ready to eat. Most of the time it is not want they to eat but never the less.. They get fed.. another hello to you.. I think your profile pic is absolutely sick and i love it.. Scholar

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