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  • "wow no offense but I don't know if you can really claim this as an "original piece" when almost every line is from an Otep song. Needless to say her words are amazing... But i couldn't get into a piece that is from someone else's mind and lips... Sorry"
    Posted by RubyXero on "Shattered pieces" by ladyofsorrow
  • "It is about a lose of a child but not with me at all. i dont agree with abortion at all. i have a beautiful little girl who i love every much and would die for. but i do know someone that has and so i wrote how i thought they feel. thanks guys!"
    Posted by ladyofsorrow on "Wrong turn" by ladyofsorrow
  • "I agree with Dwells, I got the vibe that this was about the loss of a child. It's heartbreaking, but could go many ways. There are situations that are forced upon others, but you need to come out stronger then you went in. Remember, no one can fully forgive you, love you, admire you, if you don't forgive, love, or admire yourself."
    Posted by Loketha Angel on "Wrong turn" by ladyofsorrow
  • "Don't really agree with your conclusion. Abortion is a heavy weight to bear, but then I'm probably guessing wrong again, cheers!"
    Posted by dwells on "Wrong turn" by ladyofsorrow
  • "You made me hate that house too. I too have felt this way as others have said already. I like this... and Ill pour the gas if you bring the matches."
    Posted by Unknown on "Home Sweet Home" by ladyofsorrow
  • "there are plenty of turns on the road of life. that means there are plenty of chances to make the right ones, although that's easier said than done.."
    Posted by Patches on "Wrong turn" by ladyofsorrow
  • "like an explosion of exasperation, maybe... it all runs so quickly... *their faces* maybe... the rhyme stands out as an important part of this. thanks and welcome to the valley, as V would say."
    Posted by The Dybbuk on "I must say" by ladyofsorrow
  • "but fear is just a feeling that why noone cares for its just a fear cuz fear of showing love or having fun but all is all fear who fing cares"
    Posted by Unknown on "The Fear" by ladyofsorrow
  • "for u ma feel the ways u do and u might wonder who could ever love u for i am here and there for u ill be anywhere for when i met u it was like u was glue i couldnt help but stick to u there is no easy way to say so here i go any way i love u"
    Posted by Unknown on "My family" by ladyofsorrow
  • "for the house i stay at are the same walls but some what the some laws. i hate it when my mom calls it just drives me up the hall. for this is hell to me no doubt about it for my like has split dont pay no mind to it i feel as u but u have no clue but i know i will always love u"
    Posted by Unknown on "Home Sweet Home" by ladyofsorrow
  • "Terrible and hope this was only a work of fiction. Eight kids, doubly tragic. Hoping life is being good to you now and thanks for sharing."
    Posted by dwells on "I love you always" by ladyofsorrow
  • "familys... pffft. You can't live with them and you can't bury them all in one hole.. so you love em. le sigh."
    Posted by Unknown on "My family" by ladyofsorrow
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