Comments by All Members
- "You made me smile a soft smile with this charming write on spiritual drive. It is indeed a tender piece of you. Those truthful lines and bittersweet tears seep in deep. Thank you Sean, for sharing this morsel of your life. :)"
Posted by blue angel on "Secret Promises" by Sean Mc Shane
- "wow, that's pretty intense sean. a great poem you penned. the end was a shocker, although you never directly say it, but it does leave the imagination open. and I can only guess where your fate lies. I guess down that road you somehow did the unforgiven. im thinking maybe you should of stayed in church. lol...great poem, I loved it. awesome!"
Posted by haunted on "Secret Promises" by Sean Mc Shane
- "this is the best poem that I read so far! I love this poem! plus I love the moon as well cause the moon is the most beautiful thing that I seen so far in life. "
Posted by Unknown on " Our Moon" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Wow dude.....just....damn! You had my attention with the first line! ('Them' capitalized) After that it was visual excellence wrapped with emotion intense enough to nearly overwhelm as I read through the lines. Nothing I can say will be worthy of such a magnificent work. The ending got me, and you get a 10. A very powerful write Sean, thank you for posting this........................ ~ACE~"
Posted by Peyton1 on " Our Moon" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Goodness. Haunting and romantic with a deep yearning and appreciation for this unusual glimpse of an celestial realm from the other side. They, and Them the immortals/ Saints. This is a very intriguing poem. I'm a bit lost for words. Thank you for sharing it:) Very creative writing. It makes me wonder if this was an actual dream. Take care :)"
Posted by blue angel on " Our Moon" by Sean Mc Shane
- "awe this is really a romantic poem. the moon inspires the sexy activity at night, and the romance is always enchanting under its glow. this is a nice tribute to such a mesmerizing body in our darkest skies. awesome sean!"
Posted by haunted on " Our Moon" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Every time I read your writes, all I can think is Wow. You always take us on a mysterious journey within the mind's universes, yet, with just the right dosage of madness. Those carved stones are truly all that we really own. Love this on so many levels. Thanks for sharing :)"
Posted by blue angel on " Beautiful Premonition" by Sean Mc Shane
- "This is full of thought, of questions... we all question that of what we are unable to comprehend. The last line makes me think of tending to a rose bush... cutting the bloom to save the stem from dying... at any rate I believe your worth is as high as any..."
Posted by Unknown on " Incursion" by Sean Mc Shane
- "One can sink or rise, it is always a choice even if we think otherwise... Great piece Sean and one to ponder. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on " Incursion" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Since souls are deliberately sent here, to this world where one must consume the bodies of other lifeforms to survive.I can't help but realize our Creator is nothing more than a criminally insane immortal humanoid.Nice work. "
Posted by Ortolan on " Incursion" by Sean Mc Shane
- "The power we possess is beyond our limited understanding... swallow down that gift with aggression. The strong rule... and so does this poem... awesome inking :)~ "
Posted by blue angel on " Incursion" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Hey, Sean... I agree with Dev that line is bad ass. You get me in your poetry cross hairs every time. Powerful stuff. "to be reborn in my own bloodbath is understood" wow.. that image is on fire :)~ peace to you*"
Posted by blue angel on "Too Young To Live Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Oh fuck me. I fucking remember poetry i remember when i read you . fate will bleed the last of my sick pride. talk about a line to swallow and soak in for the rest of my life. if you don't mind i would love to put that line on my profile. You are my most favorite bad boy poet. so much love sean. "
Posted by Devilish on "Too Young To Live Forever" by Sean Mc Shane
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