Comments by All Members
- "rant on! sometime's we just have to let steam off for all the bs that we take . a one-man -stand brilliantly done here. cheers!"
Posted by natalie on "Invisible Flare" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Watch out whose outlook you grasp, but then if you ever took Debate 101, you learn to argue both sides of any subject too. Superb statements of rebellion and independence perhaps. Good luck to us all."
Posted by dwells on "Invisible Flare" by Sean Mc Shane
- "This gave me a lot of visuals and some flashes of road-whizzing clips. A little White Zombie and ZZ Top crept in between some of the breaks in this for me, got me all rev'd up."
Posted by Amaryllis on "Me, Hendrix, Gloria and You" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks, FB. Yeah, the situations that caused the scars die down and fade. Too bad the scars don't. Hard to move on with constant reminders. Thanks again. later -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks, LB. You're outlook on scars is very cool. I hope someday I feel that confident and not care what others think.
You can ride shotgun with me anytime.
Thanks again. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks, OS. And I agree. My scars still play a huge role in my present time in one way or another. As far as commenting on the author's note, that's cool. It just jumped out of me at the end, and now I've been thinking more on that, than the piece itself. Anyway, thanks again. later - "
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks, Dev. If I ever have to face Mike Tyson in an improv poetry contest, I'll remember what ya said here. Glad I was your first . . . read of the day. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "I think our scars make us more interesting and I wear mine proudly. I love this reflective work Sean, guess we are all in this spirit lately. Thanks for the ride again you didn't disappoint."
Posted by Labella Blue on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "heh.. 'scars are memories you can stare at' I was just pondering this on my route earlier this morning.. when I see comments or references about people's works are like knives slicing open flesh and it all pouring out.. I would have looked at my words as more like scars, constantly haunted by memories.. you like how I avoided commenting directly on the piece and just the author's note. i'm such an ass. Anyway, thank you for sharing :)"
Posted by OLd SouL on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Holy shit.. and i say suffering suckatash.. wow.. you know how to KILL IT!!! i love your poetry sean!! hits like a heavy weight fighter.. boom! hell yeah.. my first read of the day. "
Posted by Devilish on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Yea, but it was great fun and a constant source of wonderment while it was happening I'll bet? Especially liked your "Memory Lane" description, ultra cool and profoundly personal piece, thanks Sean. "
Posted by dwells on " No Such Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks, d. Trust is a hell of a thing. Should be 100%, but never is. And I'm glad you're in the groove. And thanks again for the B-Mark. Always a igh honor. later -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Midnight's End" by Sean Mc Shane
- ""Can't wish away a lack of trust" that whole stanza was especially powerful to me, when people put their own shortcomings onto others perhaps. Really enjoyed the groove this put me in, thanks Sean!"
Posted by dwells on "Midnight's End" by Sean Mc Shane
- "Thanks again, Dev. And yes, recent scientific studies have proved that my 'fucking' rhythm is equal to, but not greater than, my 'writing' rhythm. Many notebooks and sex dolls paid the ultimate price for this sensative information. Til next time -"
Posted by Sean Mc Shane on "Midnight's End" by Sean Mc Shane
- "How did I miss this one..... Wonderful as always Sean, the imagery is divine and coffee is my favourite addiction, never tried it with an Irish lilt.... A great write. :)"
Posted by Magdalena on "Midnight's End" by Sean Mc Shane
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