Comments by All Members
- "I am very impressed, I wish I found this site earlier. Your words communicate in a way thats almost hypnotic and I am literally having a flashback. hmmm, perhaps a scene from long ago. Awsome piece!!"
Posted by Unknown on "Without ever loving you" by Mistress Shadow
- "shine the body..... great to see you posting again, shweets... welcome back... don't leave? thou, that art to thought, nourishment, like darkness to a dying flame.... or.... maybe... better to burn out than fade away? I could never hold a candle to you."
Posted by Unknown on "Wax On" by Mistress Shadow
- "Wow! Pretty good, it has such a deep touch that just wraps you in and holds you tight! Magnificient choice of words and flow.
Sincerely,
Darkys Black"
Posted by Unknown on "Bucerias" by Mistress Shadow
- "This left me with a want for more, but the brevity of this is what was so beautiful. Thank you for sharing."
Posted by Ravenblade on "Dying" by Mistress Shadow
- "Ethereal. Your wordplay has crafted a moving picture of the spirit, the plane in which love exists as reality rather than thought. We are strange and wonderful creatures, made to span both of these planes. Thank you for that insightful and affecting depiction."
Posted by Scarrzz on "To Woo a Shadow" by Mistress Shadow
- "Freaking AmaZING. How could I have missed this one? * * * That took me in, and I replayed a scene from my own life, as if you wrote it while watching what was going on inside me. The pain is so familiar, and so . . . accurate, even down to the last stanza. Instant Fav."
Posted by Scarrzz on "Without ever loving you" by Mistress Shadow
- "Such a quiet elegance to it, so beautiful, I could stand in that car hang and see the snow fall and the silence is so thick you could cut it with a knife- I LOVE this, a prime example of an atmosphere piece."
Posted by Unknown on "Red Wine and Snow" by Mistress Shadow
- "This truly is well thought out and extensive, where thoughts and wills dare to wander, i get so much from the minds eye,..if only reality could keep up. "
Posted by Unknown on "To Woo a Shadow" by Mistress Shadow
- "Sometimes I gotta wonder why it is that the most apparently erotic poems don't usually incite me, but the subtlety of theme, and the suggestiveness of word, the playfulness of the absent, and intellectual wit always seem to catch more than my eye. I've got my candle..."
Posted by Unknown on "To Woo a Shadow" by Mistress Shadow
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