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"It is a paean to where lust lives in your guts."
Posted by cadymae on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae

"...intriguing. an artfully described little journey that subsides into blissful lethargy... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae

"knowledge changes our way of thinking, and you've captured just this so very neatly in this lovely write. btw...in the second verse you have 'last' twice. unless that was deliberate. "
Posted by natalie on "My Eclectic Primer" by cadymae

"scary real; visuals...can hear that rat shrieking above the flow of Christmas music. well wrought. "
Posted by natalie on "Xmas Music" by cadymae

"I think it's strange that I have pretty much no idea what this says, yet find it absolutely wonderful. You definitely use your vocabulary very well. *makes mental note to read a dictionary*"
Posted by thyyic on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae

"Priceless masterpiece. I really enjoyed it, to the core."
Posted by Unknown on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae

"Elite vocabulary- classical pace- good write, enjoyed"
Posted by Unknown on "The poem that fell apart." by cadymae

"Thanks guys. I appreciate the kind words. :)"
Posted by cadymae on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

"Brilliant word. So many lines I love but can't pick out of... ^ ^"
Posted by Symbol on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

""You can't pull a dent out of a soul." Fantastic. "
Posted by Cyll Kroepe on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

"omg this is awesome!! the thoughts of a very strong-willed woman. i salute you!"
Posted by natalie on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

" that's brilliant with a dark light ..."
Posted by kinkifrog on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

"...your message here is clearly stated: we often prefer our dark places, rather than what others think is best for us... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "The ruination of the little black Tarn" by cadymae

"...love has many perceptions: bitter & sweet, true & deceptive, spiritual & lustful. & of course in the end nothing matters, but they certainly make life & poetry much more interesting... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "A love story" by cadymae

"Ah, lovely "To make the rough edges smoother" Nice short little write. "
Posted by Symbol on "A love story" by cadymae

"Short but it glided smoothly to the point. Keep writing."
Posted by ArcticWolf999 on "A love story" by cadymae

"love, marriage, children - used to be the normal progression. Nevertheless, one label may be as good as another in the final analysis, well-said."
Posted by dwells on "A love story" by cadymae

"...interesting take on reminiscing w/old school books, & the brutal truth that answers our curiosity... "
Posted by FadedBlues on "My Eclectic Primer" by cadymae

"Thanks for all the kind words, my fellow poets. :) I love posting stuff here. I know I'll get good feedback on my poems. I learn something every time I post one."
Posted by cadymae on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"The've been here before us and will no doubt be here after we have gone. Something to be said for socially ordered insects. But I think it maybe Communism could be the Homo sapiens equivalency, and that doesn't seem to work so well, cheers Cadymae!"
Posted by dwells on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"...I agree, the repetition is brilliant in defining the ant's 1-dimensional existence. Seuss in an intellectual vein..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"the biology of the hive mind... I like that phrase, semantically, it is loaded, very nice... the redundancy of lines' ends could be seen to mimic the repetition of the lack of free will, perhaps... only the squish stands out... the end of monotony, maybe, and rote living. I can't think of ants without recalling Thoreau... I think it was in 'brute neighbors' of Walden... where the ants become an extended metaphor for society, maybe. Been awhile. Maybe freedom is always over estimated to be something more than it could ever be. Also makes me think of Kant's 3rd antinomy... in the critique of pure reason... http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kant%27s_antinomies thanks for the thoughtful expression of considerations far beyond. :) hope you are well "
Posted by The Dybbuk on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"Are creatures are slaves to they're biology I liked this Squish at the end . "
Posted by Markus Darkscribe on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"I'm not a fan of rhyming the same word over again for the entire stanza. It really takes away from the reading of the piece. Interesting concept though."
Posted by eidos on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"Interesting and I do like ants. Keep up the good work, bro!!"
Posted by Unknown on "The ants go marching" by cadymae

"You've easily become one of my favorite poets around these parts. "
Posted by Unknown on "Untitled" by cadymae

"...great structure & rhyme scheme. Cunmmings said Age puts up warnings which Youth ignores, & keeps growing old..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "Untitled" by cadymae

"...well-detailed glimpse back at the post-war decor & high hopes of 1953. somewhere in the building someone watches 'I Love Lucy' on a black&white tv..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "April '53" by cadymae

"...a poem for us with a 'long ago' to recall. laughter & tears..."
Posted by FadedBlues on "A postcard from my youth" by cadymae

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