Comments by All Members
- "first i have to say that your ryhming is the shit! this poem flows incredibly well. very nice writing. and second, you really have pain about life. i know because ive been down that road many times and survived a couple of attempts. all i can say is it gets better, i promise! life just works itself out and its like riding a roller coaster with no brakes. when does it end. you just fucking hang on until it finally comes to a stop. i dont know your situation but for me i still live with feelings of deep emptieness and depression. you writing poems about how you feel is extremely theraputic. reach out to people, dont be alone to much if you can. if it gets to intense, call a crisis line. it can feel like nobody may love you at times. but think of those same people mourning your death. they would be a fucking mess, because they love you! "
Posted by haunted on "suicide and why" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "I know exactly how this feels... My cousin commited suicide, it killed the family... Hang in there .. It will be ok sooner than later.. Keep writing you'll see how it releases the tention slowly but SURELY.. Before you know it you'll have passed those feelings on to a new high... Were here if you need us..."
Posted by Devilish on "suicide and why" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "I hear you, but I have to say--even though I too think of suicide sometimes--that it's not the way out. Even if you think everyone hates your guts, I'm sure that there's at least one person who actually gives a fuck and will be completely devastated if you not only died, but killed yourself. They'd feel like they did shit for you and maybe you want them to feel the guilt, but it would haunt them forever. I don't know, maybe it's just me. I always try to just stay alive through the depression and the thoughts, but I know how hard it is and that's why I write poetry. Because it lets me get anger and depression out of my mind, and though you or I may seem futile, we can help people relate to our poetry and feel like they aren't alone in this big ass world. I really think you write good :) Thank you for sharing,."
Posted by Quietus on "suicide and why" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "Where does this come from?!? Your word choice, your style, your everything!! This is so beauitful. All you works have a....a fragility, a constant unyeilding, but at the same time, soft beautiful tone to them. You my friend are a great poet. I really like this, overall, everything. Just, wow."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Beautiful Afterlife" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "Almost making acid sound.....sensual. Dark and somehow intoxicating in it's mystery, but yet beautiful and fragile at the same time. Great wording going on here. Why haven't I seen you before? Jesus, great write!!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "ACiD" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
- "Wish I could hear ths set to music. This is beautiful. You make it sound so casual, "Oh, it's just a new song it wrote", lol. You should be very proud of this. Anyone that can make poetry weaved into music has my respect. Brava!! And by the by, welcome to the woods:)"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "Here I Am" by WatchTheWorldCollapse
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